Favorite Apology

[followmy_heart]

Title: Favorite Apology
House: Gryffindor
Word Count: 100
Characters/Pairings: Ron/Hermione, a little Harry/Ginny
Challenge #221: Demand a Rewrite
Author's Notes: What SHOULD have happened after that quidditch match in HBP...

“Looking for Ron?” Lavender asked sadly. “He’s over there, the filthy cheat.”

Harry looked at the corner she was indicating. There

Comments

[plaid_slytherin]

That's extremely cute. That is what should have happened.

[donnazita]

Oh yes...I agree that it's what SHOULD have happened. I mean, 7 years it takes them to decide to be with one another? Uh, no.

Anyway, great!!!

[florahart]

This is cute, but in general, could you avoid using font settings (I mean, besides the rare reasons you might use them for effect)? They might work fine in your layout, but I can't actually read this without increasing the font size because it's so tiny--if you just leave it unset, it does whatever you've got it set to in your own journal for you, and what other people have for them. You've got the font size set to extra-small (font size=1),

[followmy_heart]

i fixed it, sorry about that!

[potteresque_ire]

Heehee. Sweet. Ginny's in character too.

[jessicamariek]

*giggle* Nice one! And yes, it took those two seven years to realize they're perfect for each other? Even Ron's not that dumb. :P I like your Ginny, too.