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The Doll in the Whirlwind (Deathly Hallows Spoilers)

Jul 29, 2007 11:05

Author: Bitterfig

Title: The Doll in the Whirlwind

Character: Ariana Dumbledore

Word Count: 100

Challenge #219: After

House: Ravenclaw

The Doll in the Whirlwind

After the Muggles attacked her, Ariana Dumbledore’s blue eyes were vacant and she smiled an empty, Kewpie doll smile, as if she were frozen in the last seconds of her ( Read more... )

challenge: after, ariana, author: bitterfig

Comments 9

forsanethaec July 29 2007, 16:34:08 UTC

i really liked this, very evocative and haunting. her char's brief introduction was so interesting...this is a well-written take on it! nice :)

bitterfic July 29 2007, 16:47:29 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

pettybureaucrat July 29 2007, 17:25:47 UTC

Very sad and poignant. If Harry only had realized the Dumbledore was dealing with his own demons, he wouldn't have always been so angry at him.

bitterfic July 29 2007, 18:23:42 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

godrevypoint July 29 2007, 17:56:09 UTC

Her mind was gone, but her magic remembered.

I really loved that line. It says a lot.
Great drabble! : D

bitterfic July 29 2007, 18:32:26 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

elvishly July 29 2007, 20:18:23 UTC

I loved it -- it was chilling! Amazing what you can put in 100 words, huh?

bitterfic July 29 2007, 21:34:12 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.

cool elvishly August 19 2007, 22:44:52 UTC

hey that really was sad about ariana and i prsonally dont think that j.k did jsutice to her and her bros that much ..... either way she a stunning authore.... u also hav a way with words and maybe u can start sum fanfics for her..... oh i love to read some on her and grindlewald..... neways i liked that line where u said she lost her mind but still remembered......