It Is Our Choices / Things to Do While Locked in a Vault

[alice_pike]

Title: It Is Our Choices
House: Ravenclaw
Word Count: 100
Challenge: Bank
Characters/Pairings: Snape
Author's Notes: I don't write very Snape often; this is maybe only my second time doing so. Also, I'm not positive about his stats after school, but I think this could work

Comments

[migratory]

I like the atmosphere, and especially the last line.

Litterbug!Snape :-)

[alice_pike]

Thanks! I wrote the whole drabble on the last line, as often happens.

Lol, I'm glad you liked it!

[migratory]

Ooh, I missed the second one before - it's funny :-)

[alice_pike]

Ahh, I posted it a bit after the first one. And thanks for the comment!

[alice_pike]

Nope, not much, lol.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[ajat]

Ooo ... the 2nd one *snicker*

[alice_pike]

I'm glad you liked it!

[anonymous]

I like both of these, especially the first. I think the non-communication between snape and his mother and the unobvious but accurate placement of her bruises made it really authentic. One question though - did we have Granola bars in England in the seventies? I always thought they were an american thing...but I could be way off :D. Really nice drabbles though.

[alice_pike]

Thank you so much, that's a really nice comment. I'm glad you liked them.

And ahh, the granola bar thing. I'm didn't actually check, but it was better than Pop tarts which was my original food choice, lol. I'm not exactly sure if they have them in England or not, so your guess is as good as mine. :-)

[wulfkub]

I adore the first one, it's perfection.

The second is cute too but, man, the first one! *incoherantly raves*

[alice_pike]

Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. Having not written him that much, it makes me feel better that I'm getting such a nice response!