Moving

Jun 05, 2006 21:03


Title: Moving

House: Slytherin
Words: 100

Rating: G

Character/Pairing: Blacks

Challenge: Under Construction

The Blacks knew a good plan when they saw one. The architect was not so astute. 
But he was young and the money the job would bring, could see him into old age. 
And so it began. 
The Blacks were leaving their castle and moving into London. ( Read more... )

rating: g, author: evelynlela, challenge: under construction

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primreceded June 6 2006, 04:41:04 UTC
i think that architect was related to me, he certainly has my luck. this is a good'n :)

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evelynlela June 6 2006, 04:54:37 UTC
Why thanks :) And I hope you don't die like that, although in Terry's books the best architect, died that way, so he couldn't do anything better, and so he couldn't spill the secrets of his creation.

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olli_ander June 6 2006, 05:59:18 UTC
Oooh. I need to exercise more vigilance, I think. Another ending that I didn't expect. You've made good use of the few words you're allowed. The final sentence makes the drabble awesome, though. Well done.

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evelynlela June 6 2006, 06:47:49 UTC
Thank you, he spends so long building something but yet he can be destroyed in a moment.

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gwenlliana June 6 2006, 14:57:00 UTC
very very nice, I like what you were able to convey here. I also like how inventive it was.

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evelynlela June 8 2006, 02:01:03 UTC
:) Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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evelynlela June 8 2006, 02:04:45 UTC
Thank you :)

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migratory June 7 2006, 21:03:35 UTC
:-) Marvellous.

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evelynlela June 8 2006, 02:06:42 UTC
Thanks :)

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