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Guilt/Doubt

May 16, 2006 16:39

Title: Guilt ( Read more... )

author: youngest_one, challenge: mothers

Comments 9

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youngest_one May 18 2006, 21:17:11 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked them.

fearfulwarrior May 17 2006, 05:41:38 UTC

I agree. I love how Dumbledore's unsure of himself. Good job!

youngest_one May 18 2006, 21:17:48 UTC

Dumbledore's most fascinating to me when even he can't be sure if he's doing the right thing. Thanks for the feedback!

wulfkub May 18 2006, 04:00:16 UTC

I like them both but Guilt is perfect. Well done!

youngest_one May 18 2006, 21:18:00 UTC

Thank you!

ion_bond May 18 2006, 19:23:59 UTC

I like both of these. It's cool to read them together and compare how Lucius and Albus relate to the past.

Typo:

Did I did right by the boy

Did I do right by the boy?

youngest_one May 18 2006, 21:20:40 UTC

D'oh! Glad you caught that.

Draco wants to avoid Lucius because he'd really rather not have to deal with the emotional effects of betraying his father. He can perform well under stress, but if given a choice would opt for the easy way out. It's a point of view I can sympathize with, and even share to a certain degree, but it causes difficulties.

bluejeanphoenix May 24 2006, 17:43:37 UTC

Wow...I really love the last one. I never realized it before, but I've always sort of instinctually thought of Dumbledore as not having a mother, somehow...having sprung fully-formed from the head of Zeus, or something. :lol: Very cool insight.

youngest_one May 25 2006, 17:37:27 UTC

Thanks! I like playing with ideas about Dumbledore's past.