Jealousy

[fearfulwarrior]

Title: Jealousy
House: Ravenclaw

Challenge: Mothers
Character: Ron Weasley
Rating: G
Word Count: 100

Author's Notes: My first one. Dunno what I think about it yet.

He had to share his mum. He tried not to mind; Harry was his best mate. And he knew Harry’s mum was dead. But still, he couldn’t. He understood, Harry didn’t ask for any of this, but

Comments

[evelynlela]

Well I think it's very in character, by the way there is html in your text for some reason. But the tone is Ron, listing everything and then choosing one thing to focus on.

[fearfulwarrior]

Yeah, no idea what was up with the random html... I've always felt a bit sorry for Ron, always second best.

[evelynlela]

Ah well you got rid of it, I always thought it made Ron more, real. That he was able to say he didn't like playing sidekick.

[primreceded]

i agree it is ron-ish. especially during the goblet of fire. good job.

[fearfulwarrior]

Thanks. And, yeah, I just finished re-reading GoF, so that's probably why. :D

[darsynia]

I agree, the whole ton is so Ron, resigned, a very slight bit bitter, but understanding as well. Well done.

[fearfulwarrior]

Thank you.

[dreagoddess]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! *cuddles Ron to bits* Poor guy. You did a great job with this.

[wulfkub]

Oh, ouch! Gah, thought that a time or two in my life...