Comments | hp100: Revenge/Feast or Famine/Abject Condition/Smoke

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Revenge/Feast or Famine/Abject Condition/Smoke

Mar 18, 2006 00:16

Title: Revenge
House: Gryffindor
Rating: PG
Characters: unnamed Hogwarts student
Challenge: Starve
Word Count: 100
A/N: Eh, sorry, I saw the most horrible movie in cognitive science today about a girl who had been tortured her entire life, completely deprived of anything except for food and water. It was horrible and, to make it worse, it was a ( Read more... )

challenge: starve, peter, bellatrix, unnamed student, rating: pg, author: wulfkub, narcissa/draco

Comments 10

bloodanna March 18 2006, 07:18:25 UTC

Oh, these are wonderful!
Revenge nearly made me cry, it's just so believable that I can actually see the child.

Then you knock me out with Bella, you write her so well. The only thing is, I think, it's spelled conch, not conk. :)

I love how snotty and human Nessie is here, I can just feel her pain and then you add a wonderful Draco that sent a shiver right down my spine.

This one though: Smoke is my favorite. It's just so brilliantly done. I love how you don't say whether he is writing to James or Lily, it adds a little something.
Plus him writing the lines "I burn for you." and I starve without you. which are almost poetic in a way that his character is never written.
I just love it.

wulfkub March 18 2006, 15:50:13 UTC

Wow, *blush*

Thank you, so very much, for that. I fixed the spelling mistake (what can I say, conk is a word in the dictionary).

dragondaughters March 18 2006, 09:39:04 UTC

ok, revenge is absolutely stunning. i LOVE it. i can only imagine what was in that film u saw *shudders*.
I like the others too, esp smoke. and i love it too that u dont find out who it is that he's writing too. very good.
well done!
al xxx
ps. gonna add this to my memories just cos i love "revenge" that much!

wulfkub March 18 2006, 15:50:49 UTC

That movie sucked. That's about all I can say about it.

Thank you, very much *is totally flattered*

migratory March 18 2006, 10:37:32 UTC

Love the last one. Absolutely beautiful.

wulfkub March 18 2006, 15:50:57 UTC

Thank you.

katshakespeare March 18 2006, 16:28:33 UTC

The Narcissa one was painful, but I loved it. As for the Pete one - ooooh. Intriguing!

wulfkub March 18 2006, 18:33:26 UTC

Thanks!

alice_pike March 19 2006, 04:50:25 UTC

Um, is it bad that I sort of laughed at the last line of the Bella one? It just seemed so profound and metaphorical, then so blunt and rather ironic at the end that I laughed.

deprived of anyone else's suffering except for her own and the endless sobbing of the sea on the shore. Loved this line though, so that's probably why; it's a fitting contrast to the end of it. And omg, yes, I agree with what the others said about Revenge. That movie must have been horrible, too.

About Smoke, hmm. It's interesting. I thought immediately that he was writing to James, although that was completely unwonted because that's never even crossed my mind before. And while after I thought about it, I was like, 'yeah he's talking about Lily,' it almost makes more sense being James. Either way I really like it, is the point I'm trying to make...

wulfkub March 19 2006, 05:03:56 UTC

LOL, I laughed when I wrote it, to be honest. I was aiming for something blunt and so very Bella, which I happen to think it is, and I was rather pleased with the way that one turned on me.

Besides, can you imagine being killed with a sea shell? LOL.

The movie sucked. The less said about it, the better my brain is. I seriously felt like getting out the clorox and scrubbing my mind after seeing it.

LOL, I was writing it with Lily in mind but it makes as much sense being James. Of course, the fact that 99.9% of what I write is het would prolly be a huge clue, lol.