Comments | hp100: Missing Him/Missed Emotions/Missed Signals/Floo Call/Miss Take/Miss Understandings/Miss Weasley

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Missing Him/Missed Emotions/Missed Signals/Floo Call/Miss Take/Miss Understandings/Miss Weasley

Feb 12, 2005 01:19

Title: Missing Him ( Read more... )

hermione granger, author: bluejeanphoenix, ron hermione, ron, ron weasley/hermione granger, post-war, hermione, rating: pg-13, harry, challenge: miss, harry potter, ron weasley, ron/hermione

Comments 15

persephone_kore February 12 2005, 06:41:38 UTC

Oh, my.

You write wonderful drabble-series. Poor Hermione, and poor Ron -- even with each other, it killed something inside them both to lose Harry. Too much grief to feel anything properly... until the baby kicked them awake again, anyway. I liked Ginny's rejection of the idea that their lives were grief, now that they had someone else to take care of, and Hermione's protest and then agreement. I thought the results of the Floo Call -- disappointment, homecoming, and the wonderful details of the Stunner and the cushioning charm on the toilet lid -- were perfect.

And I really like that they named a daughter after Harry.

bluejeanphoenix February 12 2005, 22:47:15 UTC

Thank you :) I really like drabble series...I like how one idea inspires another, and they form a kind of chain...it's sort of like writing haikus on a theme, in a way.

Very adept interpretation...you're spot on.

Yeah :) "Harriet" made me very happy! :lol: Especially Harriet Jane Granger...I think Ron with a daughter would be absolutely adorable.

jelsemium February 12 2005, 06:57:49 UTC

Wow! These are just beautiful! I like how their relationship and their lives were saved by their daughter.

My fave drabble was the one where Hermione accidentally shot Ron with a stunner.

My fave scene was when Ron's eyes came alive.

Good job!

bluejeanphoenix February 12 2005, 22:48:40 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

:lol: Glad you liked the Stunner...Hermione always was a bit...err...tense.

I love that part too...Ron's eyes are his distinguishing feature, in my opinion. :nods sagely:

Glad you liked them! :)

leelastarsky February 12 2005, 07:05:57 UTC

Oh, I loved that!!

bluejeanphoenix February 12 2005, 22:49:02 UTC

Thank you! :)

ladyg_funk February 12 2005, 15:26:55 UTC

They're wonderful! I liked this series. It seems like a real plausible scenario. Go Hufflepuff!

bluejeanphoenix February 12 2005, 22:51:56 UTC

Thank you! :)

:face painted yellow and black:
BADGERS RULE!

yma2 February 12 2005, 15:55:26 UTC

Aw, very sweet, I like the idea of them both being numb after. So sweet.

bluejeanphoenix February 12 2005, 22:52:17 UTC

Thank you :) I'm really glad you liked!