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keever in hp100

Pride / Anger / Lust

Oct 02, 2004 06:10

Title: Pride
House: Gryffindor
Word Count: 100
Characters/Pairings: Remus/Sirius, James
Author's Notes: For the seven deadly sins challenge. A series of three, all set after the infamous prank ( Read more... )

sirius black, remus lupin, sirius/remus, author: keever, james potter, challenge: the seven deadly sins

Comments 17

estebanmaturin October 2 2004, 14:14:09 UTC

*dies from love* I absolutely love the angle you take on this. and the heartwrenching line "You don't get to call me that anymore!" beautiful.

keever October 2 2004, 22:14:54 UTC

I'm glad you liked them. That line had actually been floating around in my head for a while, just waiting for the right time to be used. Apparently, this was it.

acid October 2 2004, 14:59:36 UTC

Oh wow. That last line for "Anger" did it for me. *Applauds* Great work.

keever October 2 2004, 22:15:43 UTC

Thank you. Poor Remus!

scoober October 2 2004, 15:00:50 UTC

I love love Anger. "You don't get to call me that any more!" is gorgeous.

keever October 2 2004, 22:16:12 UTC

Glad to hear it. Thank you.

inbetweener October 2 2004, 17:09:12 UTC

Gosh, I love all of these. And they're so well-written that I'm dying to know the backstory! Brilliant :)

keever October 2 2004, 22:19:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm somewhat obsessed with the fallout from the prank. It was really hard to do this in just 300 words. So, um, I might have to write some more.

inbetweener October 10 2004, 12:48:23 UTC

It was really hard to do this in just 300 words. So, um, I might have to write some more.

*Nods*. Shame. Now go write some more ;)

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keever October 2 2004, 22:20:03 UTC

Tee hee!