Comments | hottamalee88: AIDE-MOI!

hottamalee88

AIDE-MOI!

Oct 29, 2005 12:51

OK U GUYS. i need your help. i just finished typing my newspaper story. but i have a problem. i cant think of a last sentence. im looking for a like little inspiring/cheery sentence to end it with. pllllllllllllllease help me out if u have any ideas. and let me kno if you like the rest of the story too. MERCI BEAUCOUP! (ps.i changed the names of ( Read more... )

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bittersweetluv_ October 29 2005, 18:23:05 UTC

danngg. i like the story its awsome. srry. i suck at them lol

i would end it saying..
"MR.COMOS IS A FAG!!"

hottamalee88 October 29 2005, 18:27:40 UTC

lol. i will run that idea by him

chakaraprincess October 29 2005, 18:45:20 UTC

hmm... i like the way you think...
christay- i think comos'll love it... now wanna help me start mine?

hottamalee88 October 29 2005, 18:46:57 UTC

i thought u were done with urs?! whats ur story about?

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theteflonocean October 29 2005, 19:38:54 UTC

I like it, ;) but right now your asking the wrong girl, I've been on brain dead, seriously. What's going on with you?? Did Brittany show you my paer?

hottamalee88 October 29 2005, 19:54:44 UTC

NO THAT BITCH KEEPS FORGETING IT!

theteflonocean October 29 2005, 21:11:37 UTC

yikes!!!! Why not ask Lizzie she's got a issue as well. I could send you the second issue, if it makes you feel better.

theteflonocean October 30 2005, 00:11:05 UTC

My head is much clearer, I highly suggest going with connecting it back to your opening saying that women need to not worry about what other people and concentrate on whats right for them, and etc. My wording may be off but its an idea, for me I always have to take my own spin, but that's probably just me. Hope the suggestion helps a little.

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efil_drawkcab October 29 2005, 20:10:44 UTC

you seem like a very good writer and this sounds very good. I'm pretty good at writing myself, so I looked for some spots that I thought could use a bit of work. They're just my suggestions, take it or leave it. Most of the stuff I found is minor, so sorry if it seems like I'm picking it apart. Like I said, it sounds good ( ... )

hottamalee88 October 30 2005, 02:20:06 UTC

wow. lol. you are sooooo helpful. thanks so much mike...seriously

tamara_jane October 29 2005, 22:23:49 UTC

Maybe your next story should be about the obesity epidemic and how 25% of Michigan residents have a BMI that puts them in the range of obesity. And also how the rate of disease goes up when weight goes up, which ultimately raises the prices for health care. Sounds like a good story to me. But, the one you wrote it good too. I'm not really obsessed with my image, I'm just obsessed with having a healthy image. I don't think it's neccesarily bad when people like to be healthy by eating the right foods and working out. More people need to work out and be healthy. Starving myself was idiotic. Now I have a dietician and I love her and I'm eating like constantley and not gaining because I'm choosing the right foods and I'm working out the right way with heart rate monitoring. More people need to be conscious of what they are doing to their bodies.

tamara_jane October 29 2005, 22:25:10 UTC

it good too = is good too

hottamalee88 October 30 2005, 02:22:32 UTC

im so sick of girls trying to have the body of a model. it isnt healthy to be that skinny. and honestly, what you look like shouldnt make you happy. im not saying you like...you tamra. im saying you like ppl in general. just to clear that up. its just annoying to see how shallow ppl are when it comes to looking good. i think it is one of the most selfish things in the world. get over urself. sry...had to vent.

tamara_jane October 30 2005, 02:29:53 UTC

I'm not saying I want the body of a model, I'm sure a lot of other girls don't either. I want a healthy body. People like Kate Moss and Nicole Ritchie and Lindsay Lohan are so digusting. People have no idea how unhealthy they are when it comes to weight. and weight is not just a number. it's a combination of lean body mass and body fat. people's weight goes up when their body fat is too high. it's a balance that people need to have the fat is taking over people's bodies. like all of the girls who walk around with their guts hanging out and their butt cracks hanging out... if you call that beautiful and attractive, then maybe you should stop reading your she-woman feminist pieces and look into the big picture of how healthy this culture is and how people need to do things about it. at least a lot of people work to acheive the body they have and it's little jealous girls who are too lazy to go work out who actually wish they were thinner who seem to have the biggest problem with it. a lot of girls don't go around saying they are hot ( ... )

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