FIC: All Good Things (Steve/Danny, PG-13)

Feb 22, 2011 08:40

Title: All Good Things
Author: hotel_window
Summary: "See, I guess I thought you were asking for my thoughts before you made any huge, life-changing decisions."
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating/warnings/content: PG-13 for language, angst
Word count: ~300
A/N: Written for sd_ldws's week five for the prompts of angst and "I told you so." Thanks to nova33 for the beta.

All Good Things )

fic: steve/danny, fic: h50, fic

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fuflowers February 23 2011, 19:21:41 UTC
Oh. This is just so sad.
Why would you do something like this to them? Why?

Nicely written, though. Wonderfully angsty.

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hotel_window February 23 2011, 19:36:49 UTC
Aw, sorry! :( I actually hate writing angst for these two. I prefer to think that they just banter and have sex and fight crime for the rest of their lives.

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kitmerlot1213 February 23 2011, 19:23:10 UTC
Damn, but this was painful!

I can't believe that Steve would rather go back to the Navy then run Five-0. My heart just breaks for Danny's loss and feelings of betrayal.

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hotel_window February 23 2011, 19:39:20 UTC
I know. :( I actually think Steve would have a hard time leaving at this point, but I can also see him doing his impulsive, tunnel vision thing (like in episode one when he impulsively took the job after finding Danny the Champ box) and thinking, "Well, my job here is done!"

In my head though, he runs Five-0 forever and Danny is always his partner. ♥

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americandirrty February 23 2011, 19:27:23 UTC
Oh this is sad. I really like it though!

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hotel_window February 23 2011, 19:39:52 UTC
Thank you! <3

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windycitygirly February 23 2011, 19:29:56 UTC
Oh...my... Nnnnnoooooo!

But they wear angst so well.

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hotel_window February 23 2011, 19:40:13 UTC
They do, don't they? Thanks so much!

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michele659 February 23 2011, 19:47:05 UTC
NO!!!! Wonderfully written but-no!!! Get them back together,please! :D

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hotel_window February 23 2011, 20:01:31 UTC
They will! Danny will tell him that he's an idiot and he loves him, and Steve will realize he needs to stay, and then they'll have great sex for the rest of their lives. ♥?

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michele659 February 23 2011, 20:11:35 UTC
Yes! Yes! Write that,please! :D

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