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hot_4_hahn

I Know What I'm Looking For Now

Aug 04, 2009 22:45

mp3 I Know What I’m Looking For Now

Erica’s eyes widened appreciably as she watched Mary Jo walk back through the bathroom doorway. In truth Mary Jo didn’t so much walk, as she sauntered. Her arms raised behind her head, pulling the pins from her hair. It had gotten long and the dark curls fell past her shoulders. Erica’s gaze dropped to the ( Read more... )

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seabookmonger August 5 2009, 04:07:48 UTC

Bedtime reading, sexy bedtime reading. I think I liked the flirty banter in the beginning the best of all. I also like the way their relationship evolves into this maturing love. I think Erica is grateful to be loved by someone she respects and trusts. Good night, good night.

hot_4_hahn August 6 2009, 01:26:30 UTC

*smile* Sexy bedtime reading. Score!

After the angst I recently perpetrated with this pair, I'm looking forward to getting back to the flirting, sweetness, and lighter journey of them continuing to get to know one another. So, they'll be more in the style of the first part, I think.

I'm so glad you're feeling an evolution with them as Erica (and Mary Jo, too) become more familiar and comfortable. Thank you for the lovely comment!

jaguarjg August 5 2009, 10:37:57 UTC

Porn without plot, I heart thee ( ... )

hot_4_hahn August 6 2009, 01:35:03 UTC

*chuckles* Steamy at work is dangerous. I'm sure my colleagues have wondered at times about the color in my cheeks. *wink ( ... )

jaguarjg August 6 2009, 10:14:21 UTC

Your more than welcome!

Its afternoon here so probably silly oclock in the morning where you are but I just wanted to say Happy Birthday!

I hope you have a great day and get spoiled a wee bit ;-)

hot_4_hahn August 7 2009, 02:54:41 UTC

Aw, you're too sweet. I really appreciate the birthday wish. Thank you so much. I did try to make it a good one.

*hearts Thank you!

greys_1 August 6 2009, 12:05:57 UTC

happy birthday hun!

Hope you have a brilliant day, you always give us such sexy little snippits, mary jo aint the only one begging for more ;)

i loved mj chuckling at erica's attempts during the bathroom, it's great to witness these small moments, where you make it feel so real.
thanks, as always :)

cali2ak August 6 2009, 18:19:52 UTC

I have never posted a comment before, but figured it was about time to do so. I really enjoy reading your stories. I really like the way you can develop a character.

In this case, I really like they way that erica feels comfortable enough with her relationship with Mary Jo to have her at a dinner with collegues from the hospital. That's a huge step forward in any relationship.

I would love to see Mary Jo see Dr. Hahn at the hospital.

Thank you for your writings.

hahnsrockstar August 7 2009, 02:20:26 UTC

I totally read this the night you posted it but haven't had the chance to comment yet. Of course, it's wonderful. After all the angst with these two it's lovely to see the happy back. Kind of an appetizer before the rest of the fun Fluffy McWoobiecakes begins.

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