Dying On The Vine

[hot_4_hahn]

Author’s Note:  This is in response to a double dog dare I received from

Comments

[whitelder]

Finaly someone shuts Sydney up!

[hot_4_hahn]

Haha, leave it to our Erica to find a way to make Sydney tolerable. Thanks!

[raventat]

Okay so I have admit. I read this because it was you and after the goodness that was the merica het I figured what the hell and gave it a nonjudgmental try. I'm glad I did because now I can honestly say that Erica +Sydney heron + sex does not equal a positive number. Hell sex+Sydney heron = negative infinity and no amount of Erica positiveness could save that. Not that it wasn't well written. and the ball gag was ingenious but there's just something about Sydney and sex that does sit right with me. Incidentally, I could totally see Sydney and Arizona together. That made a lot of sense to me probably because Arizona + sex is just as bad. Neither character has any sex appeal in my opinion so in my mind it's okay if they gotether. Anywho I glad you got to try something new and I really hope you enjoyed writing it.

[hot_4_hahn]

Well, this was my challenge - to see if I could make Erica acceptable with anyone. *smile* Apparently, not anyone. But, I do completely see where you're going with the lack sex appeal for Sydney. My original intention was for Erica to be the sole instigator, and you see where we wound up.

I did enjoy this, thanks. And I appreciate hearing it was well written, even if the characters didn't quite jive. But, punky has issued a dare that maybe this story isn't quite done. Could Erica discover that this "little nonsense of a girl is worth her time?" We'll see what comes of it.

Thank you!

[iluvcallie]

Your talents never cease to amaze me. Really, I mean, SYDNEY!! I literally cringed a bit when I saw the pairing, but you did it and made it..HOT. You probably write Erica better than most folks I've read and captured her reaction to Sydney perfectly. Her finding out Sydney would be working there was priceless. "Dear God, take me now". AWESOME!

Great job.

[hot_4_hahn]

I cringed when it came down to sitting and writing this out. But, then it turned into this really fun time. It was wonderful to bring back this take-no-crap Erica Hahn. I need to incorporate her more into my femslash world.

Thank you so much. Your comment is too generous, but I really appreciate it.

[mean_manic]

Oh God! Try to imagine Sydney and "Santa Fe" together!;) no wonder they didn't work out. One bloody happy parade that relationship could be!

[hot_4_hahn]

Sydney and AZ = total fail, I think. Can you imagine? *shudders*

Thank you!

[cranky__crocus]

I have not read this yet, but I am leaving a comment in advance to tell you just how excited I am to read a Hahn/Heron. Ahhh I am going to set aside some good time to enjoy this, laughter. Thank you!

[hot_4_hahn]

*laughs* Well, I can only hope you enjoy it. I really took it with a grain of salt and had fun writing it. So no, thank you!