Dying On The Vine

Jul 17, 2009 21:50

Author’s Note:  This is in response to a double dog dare I received from
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guest artist: hahnsrockstar, kink_bingo prompt, erica 'friggin' hahn

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greys_1 July 18 2009, 08:22:46 UTC
This certainly was a surprise, and I laughed when erica's toy finally had it's first use. perhaps this also was sydney's first use, and Erica's final, clinging memory and care with seatle grace. finally she'd moved on, and got her some sexy time too. when it comes to sydney, i couldn't agree more - silence is golden.

I'm going to be all weird and point out a line I enjoyed far too much: Rising to my knees and crawling over her, my breasts swing low and graze along her flesh as I move up her body.

can't wait to see what flies into your little head next.
xo lauren.

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hot_4_hahn July 19 2009, 11:43:17 UTC
I think it's certainly a twisty universe where these two would get together. I was trying to prove that Erica could work with anybody. Maybe once Sydney reflects on Erica's toy she'll comprehend the true intention behind it and give Erica some piece at work.

It was also nice to write from the perspective that Erica was able to let go here, and finally turn her back on all that bad business back in Seattle. A little healing time for them both.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I've been issued some additional dares, so buckle up. *wink* Thanks!

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i_ms_hill July 18 2009, 14:11:03 UTC
That was unexpected. I too cringed when I saw Sydney next to Erica's name, but I must say that I really liked this story. I can't see Sydney and Arizona together but that's probably because I can't stand either character. But anyway, I liked how you were to first one to come up with a good way to shut her up!!

Can't wait to see what you write next!

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hot_4_hahn July 19 2009, 11:46:24 UTC
I'll agree that Sydney is cringe worthy. *smile* This was a real treat to write though because I was able to bring a bit of that hardnosed Hahn into an encounter with another woman. I'd fallen into a little convention of having her be vulnerable and softer with women, so this helped be step out of that box a little bit.

And I'm so thrilled to hear you liked it. Thank you so much. I've got some other crazy pairings lined up. So, I appreciate the encouragement.

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hectic1 July 18 2009, 20:38:48 UTC
Sydney Heron? Sydney freakin' Heron?! How in the hell did you make this work? This was really amusing and disturbingly hot there at the end considering one of the participants is Sydney Heron. *shudder* I can't believe this is one of my favorite pieces you've ever written. I thought it was hysterical. I laughed throughout it. The very concept of Erica/Sydney tickles me. They are so fabulously incompatible ( ... )

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hot_4_hahn July 19 2009, 11:55:20 UTC
Sydney Heron...who'd a thought it could be done. This was me proving that Erica is hot and can get her sexy time with anybody. I think occasionally the hottest sex doesn't have anything to do with emotion or even liking the other person; taking someone in almost disgust sometimes it just the remedy.

I confess, you caught me with my little Callie revenge in here. But hey, at least I can be honest with myself. *wink* And AZ/Sydney...talk about a hot mess. But, it was too delicious of a catalyst to get these two together. AZ is Sydney's Callie, and Erica understands what Sydney needs all too well.

I'm glad it turned out fun, rather than disastrous. It was an awful lot of fun to write. And Punky has suggested that this pair deserve at least a little more attention. I'm always up for a challenge, so let's see if we can get these two a bit more serious. At least one more piece, I think.

Thank you for the fabulous comment, and the encouragement. I appreciate it more than you know.

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hot_4_hahn July 20 2009, 23:42:20 UTC
Yeah, Sydney seems like one of the least sexy characters on that show. So, I just had to have a go at it. This would certainly be the odd couple. But, I've been challenged to see if I can do a little more with this pair, so there may be another fic. So perhaps I can feed your new ship.

I really appreciate that you gave this fic a try. I know all about becoming disillusioned with a fandom.

I really appreciate the lovely feedback. Thank you so much!

P.S. I love your Weeds icon.

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anonymous July 21 2009, 00:37:34 UTC
Yay, can't wait for more of these two together!

P.S.: Thanks, I love Celia/Nancy, my other ship that no one writes about lol

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hot_4_hahn July 20 2009, 23:46:12 UTC
What better way for Erica to make Sydney even remotely tolerable in the bedroom...gag her. And I just couldn't resist the notion of Sydney criticizing AZ for perkiness (I full embrace that notion that we hate things in others that we really hate about ourselves).

This pairing was really just too much fun to write. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the wonderful comment.

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