*Smile* I'm so glad to hear that one worked. I didn't want to take it too far. But, I hope under the right circumstances, Erica could make about anything hot. Thank you!
Okay, I don't know what's higher than Queen of the Smut, but whatever it is, you're totally rocking it! I didn't think it would be possible to do that first one without mentioning certain things, but you did it - and so, so well. I'm amazed you managed to; that'll teach me to have more faith now, won't it? And, as always, a fantastic characterization of Erica. As disturbing as actually trying to picture it is, I can picture it, which is kind of amazing. I can imagine that it's not the kind of enjoyment Mark's gonna be getting much of, so I'm glad he's enjoying it while it lasts :P
I knew Doug was getting caught, but nice little twist there with the wife/girlfriend not seeming mad. I have to say, I can't imagine anything more boring than televised golf, but whatever, sounds like he's got plenty to entertain himself with now. And they are beautiful together, Erica and Mary Jo. I don't think I've ever enjoyed an original character in fanfic anywhere near as much as I do Mary Jo
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Oh, you know me. I have to couch the het in euphemisms. I hoped with a few thoughtful descriptors we could get the picture what Erica's doing.
I can imagine that it's not the kind of enjoyment Mark's gonna be getting much of... I just had to smirk at that comment. Right on the money.
With the second one, I hoped that the exchange at the end, with Doug and his wife, would make the voyeurism a little less tawdry. And I think Mary Jo, in her own head at least, opened the door to the neighbors' participation in their little pool fun.
Fiction as a form of voyeurism? Absolutely! I've been feeling that, especially with my little smutty one-shots. But, really it's all the pieces. Peeking inside one's head, watching and dissecting their actions, trying to get a glimpse of the mystery behind their behavior.
I really am grateful that you're willing to push your hesitancy aside with these kink prompts. I completely understand that they're not all going to be for everyone. Heck, very few of them are for me. So we may well have
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Time for a cold shower before bed!!! LOL
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Thank you!
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Have a great weekend!
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Yeah, my lez cred is taking a beating. But, I'm so glad you liked the second little on. Thank you!
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In the second one I hoped that little beautiful comment would make the voyeurism less creepy and more sexy.
Thank you so much for the very nice comments.
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I knew Doug was getting caught, but nice little twist there with the wife/girlfriend not seeming mad. I have to say, I can't imagine anything more boring than televised golf, but whatever, sounds like he's got plenty to entertain himself with now. And they are beautiful together, Erica and Mary Jo. I don't think I've ever enjoyed an original character in fanfic anywhere near as much as I do Mary Jo ( ... )
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I can imagine that it's not the kind of enjoyment Mark's gonna be getting much of... I just had to smirk at that comment. Right on the money.
With the second one, I hoped that the exchange at the end, with Doug and his wife, would make the voyeurism a little less tawdry. And I think Mary Jo, in her own head at least, opened the door to the neighbors' participation in their little pool fun.
Fiction as a form of voyeurism? Absolutely! I've been feeling that, especially with my little smutty one-shots. But, really it's all the pieces. Peeking inside one's head, watching and dissecting their actions, trying to get a glimpse of the mystery behind their behavior.
I really am grateful that you're willing to push your hesitancy aside with these kink prompts. I completely understand that they're not all going to be for everyone. Heck, very few of them are for me. So we may well have ( ... )
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