Comments | hot_4_hahn: Kink_Bingo: Deepthroating & Voyeurism

hot_4_hahn

Kink_Bingo: Deepthroating & Voyeurism

Jun 17, 2009 21:32

Okay, these are two short little drabbles that actually do satisfy my very first

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kink_bingo prompt, merica, erica 'friggin' hahn

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hot_4_hahn June 19 2009, 11:14:12 UTC

...to make a point: that she's Erica 'Friggin' Hahn and she can do anything... haha, Exactly!

I love your assessment of the Merica Erica. I think Mark sincerely brings out the badass in her. And she'll prove she can tackle any task, rise above any challenge, always keep the upper hand.

I love having my two separate worlds for Erica. Sweet love with Mary Jo. Pure carnal desire with Mark.

Thank you so much! What a wonderful comment.

cam_23 June 18 2009, 09:24:10 UTC

Great. =]]
I can't wait for more of your card!!!

hot_4_hahn June 19 2009, 11:14:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm just thrilled that you're looking forward to more of these little prompts.

Oh happy day! jaguarjg June 18 2009, 12:29:16 UTC

Oh my god!! I thought you were joking when you said I gave you an idea! Haha! Well you just made my day and I really needed some cheering up today so thank you very much!! :D ( ... )

Re: Oh happy day! jaguarjg June 19 2009, 08:57:31 UTC

Please ignore my comment about how clever you are with the callica ref, my brain didn't seem to absorb the pleading and hinting and failed attempts sentence, I blame the heat and my over excitement,and Pat Robertson. End of the quarter, its been a tough week, forgive me!

Re: Oh happy day! hot_4_hahn June 19 2009, 11:36:15 UTC

No joke, you had a brilliant little idea, and it fit here perfectly. Thank you so much for that. Mary Jo just set it up perfectly for him, so hopefully that alleviates a little bit of the creepiness. After all, he’s only intruding on a not so private moment. And yeah, I did kind of play with the idea in my head that the wife was most likely fully aware what he was doing. Perhaps she had caught Erica and Mary Jo herself, at some point ( ... )

serpentsfirst June 18 2009, 15:14:35 UTC

Well, well, now you're going for the kill with that kink bingo, aren't you. *bows head in utter amazement ( ... )

hot_4_hahn June 19 2009, 11:58:09 UTC

Well, I'm so glad you didn't see the first one as Erica submitting to Sloan. I think that is what I was most cautious about conveying, even more so than the avoidance of the illicit act. I wanted this to be about her taking charge and doing what she wanted, not what he necessarily wanted ( ... )

hectic1 June 18 2009, 16:28:39 UTC

So I'm on my lunch break and decide to pop onto the internet and see what's kicking and what do I spy but the words 'deepthroating' and 'voyeurism.' I honestly almost didn't open this because...well deepthroating and voyeurism are not two of my favorite things. Was that TMI? Anyhoo...lo and behold, I liked these ( ... )

hot_4_hahn June 19 2009, 12:17:16 UTC

Well, I can certainly see how these two prompts would bring hesitancy.

I knew I had to do the deepthroating with Merica, I just was concerned with how explicit I would have to be, and with how that was going to change the dynamic of their relationship. So, ultimately I decided to just go with the euphemisms I’ve been using. I’m so glad to hear it worked. I just loved the idea of this being an exercise that Erica set her mind to. Sexy, but still with that detachment that allows her to maintain the upper hand.

Well, I keep sneaking Mary Jo in on you in these drabbles, huh? So yeah, there’s context behind the neighbor’s peeping tomness. Mary Jo is inviting it a little bit. Well, maybe a lot. And really if you’re interested in the back-story for this little one you don’t have to dredge through that serial (they’re in the middle of a fight anyhoo). It’s from the last one-shot I wrote. Concrete SkySmut light? Yes. I think we would have gotten into your gross territory with #1, if I had really got down into the moment. I ( ... )