FIC: "Sore" (Star Trek, Kirk/McCoy, NC-17)

[hoosierbitch]

Title: Sore
Author: hoosierbitch 
Fandom: Star Trek: Reboot
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Warnings: Rough sex, D/S, spanking, orgasm denial.
Disclaimer: Star Trek does not belong to me, and I am making no money by writing this story.
Summary: Jim gave himself to Starfleet. And every night, Bones took him back.

Comments

[anne_higgins]

This is just the sort of 'OMG, I'm such a pervert for liking this' story that I love.

Yeah, I adore to pieces epic romances and mushy love, but I've also got a true fondness for Bones really gives it to him. And you wrote it so well!

Just sizzling!

[hoosierbitch]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I think "OMG, I'm such a pervert for liking this" is becoming my niche...

:D

[anne_higgins]

:> BTW, I guess, from your username, that we're from the same state.

[hoosierbitch]

Oh, mebbe! :D

I grew up there, and didn't think I'd miss it when I moved away - but I really do! I'm happy to be going back into the depths of the Midwest for grad school. :D

[sexycazzy]

Awesome!

I just loved it! :)

Dom!Bones is so possessive - sexy & yummy!

And Kirk worrying about what he has done wrong...and Bones reassuring him and kissing him - just so sweet! :)

And the ending - *guh*

Full of greatness!

[hoosierbitch]

Oh, thank you so much - what lovely, specific feedback. I really appreciate it! *hugs*

[daria234]

Amazing job as usual :)

I love that Jim needs validation and punishment and promises just to function, and that Bones knows how much he needs. Love the discussion of ownership vs job, and the line you put in your summary.

But don't let my love for your great characterizations obscure the fact that I thought it was uber-hot. Great one!

[hoosierbitch]

Thank you SO MUCH, Daria! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it - both the hotness, and the characterization!

[hoosierbitch]

*laughs*

EXCELLENT! I'm so glad you enjoyed it - thank you for your (always) lovely feedback. :D

[xela_fic]

Good god that was hot. Really, really hot. I'm just...gonna go...yeah

mmmmm

[hoosierbitch]

*laughs*

Thank you so much! Incoherent feedback is my favorite - it mean's I've done my job correctly! :D