FIC: "Sore" (Star Trek, Kirk/McCoy, NC-17)

[hoosierbitch]

Title: Sore
Author: hoosierbitch 
Fandom: Star Trek: Reboot
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Warnings: Rough sex, D/S, spanking, orgasm denial.
Disclaimer: Star Trek does not belong to me, and I am making no money by writing this story.
Summary: Jim gave himself to Starfleet. And every night, Bones took him back.

Comments

[easilymused1956]

I, ah...yeah.

This story is like, Scotch Bonnet chili hot!

Renee

[hoosierbitch]

I had to look up Scotch Bonnet, so not only did I get a lovely comment (thank you!) but I also got KNOWLEDGE.

<3

[easilymused1956]

Lalala

I have seen raw Scotch Bonnet peppers bring grown men to their knees...crying!

They are awesome hot. Just like your story.

Renee

[seussian]

*sing song voice* Hoooooooosieeeeerr!! You are officially in the top 3 of my Star Trek authors ranking. First the Spock POV fic, and now this dom!Bones and his "good boy" Captain Kirk fic?

Jesus. *eyebrow of appreciative perviness*

Jim's emotionality is spot-on, and Bones's quest to "take him back" every night is inspired. I looooove this dynamic between the two of them. Plus, ya know, this fic is my hot hot sex.

[hoosierbitch]

YOU MAKE MY LIFE A BETTER PLACE.

Thank you so much for your totally awesome feedback!

*smoosh*

[seussian]

It's funny, I was just over at themkshrine's journal tonight reading one of her White Collar fics and she mentioned in a reply to someone's comment that you were her inspiration for dry orgams in fic. It's like my worlds are colliding on LJ, and I love it.

*smooshes back*

[hoosierbitch]

LMAO

We share the same porn brain. She's given me SO MANY KINKS, IDEK.

[themkshrine]

First of all: Did you just safeword? On the bridge?

LMFAO!!!!!!! And hot too!!

But then: “Spread your cheeks.”

Jim obeyed. His hands were shaking, but they were quick. And when he had his cheeks spread, Bones spanked his hole until he cried.

You...YOU READ MY MIND! Um, HUGE Lust Arrow. You know what a Lust Arrow IS, right? Fucking hell, woman.

And this is BEAUTIFUL!!!!:

He let Jim fuck himself back on Bones’ dick, and then forward into his hand. Faster and faster until his moans were almost as steady as the smack of skin on skin, lewd and intimate as the teethmarks he left on Jim’s strong shoulders.

You ROCKED this. Thank you!

[hoosierbitch]

THANKS, BABY! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I think I will have to put hole-spanking in more fics. It seems to be a fave.

Also, UNF.

<3

[sayfray]

Dom!Bones is like a new kink for me, it's so hot. I hope you write dom!Bones again sometime, because this was just... romantic and sexy as hell.

[hoosierbitch]

Thank you so much! I think my next fic's going to be the obligatory Pon Farr fic (because if I'm going to write Star Trek porn, HOW CAN I NOT WRITE THE WEEK-LONG 'BIOLOGY MADE THEM DO IT' TROPE?).

But I've really enjoyed writing Kirk/Bones, so I will probably swing back around. THANK YOU! :D

[goldenfish_jz]

Wow!
It was truly amazing.
So hot and yet cute, you know...
I really like it when people portrait Bones with strong personality, usually he is just there to be fucked by Jim. I love it when he is obsessed or possessive or whatever cute and twisted thing, and when possessive!Bones is togheter with passive!Jim, it is like heaven xD
Thank you!

[hoosierbitch]

Thank you - what lovely feedback! :D

I was already a huge Karl Urban fan, LOVED the way he played Bones, and have come to like the character more and more as I've started writing him - it's great to hear that it's working for other people, too! :D