fic: tomorrow is a mystery

Oct 16, 2011 19:13

Title: Tomorrow is a mystery
Rating: PG
Characters/pairing: River, Eleven (River/Eleven, River/Doctor)
Wordcount: ~500
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: River regenerates in the Library, and Eleven arrives to pick her up.

For the Hell in Heels ficathon. winninghearts prompted: River/Eleven, AU. She doesn't die in the Library. She regenerates, (out ( Read more... )

p: eleven/river, fic, fic: doctor who, c: river, c: eleven, p: doctor/river

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dqbunny October 16 2011, 17:36:47 UTC
*laugh* Oh, a geography teacher. That's brilliant. Off you go, you two, to take over the universe together!

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honeynoir October 16 2011, 21:52:54 UTC
Oh, they certainly will... :D

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elisi October 16 2011, 17:56:57 UTC
Oh if only...

Favourite line:

Did you regenerate the suit?

Because she totally would! :D

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honeynoir October 16 2011, 21:50:50 UTC
Because she totally would! :D
And the Doctor would be like "I could do that too don't think you're special how did you do it?".

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bendingwind October 16 2011, 18:56:08 UTC
&MEGAHEARTS

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honeynoir October 16 2011, 21:51:31 UTC
&THESAMETOYOU

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cinderbella333 October 16 2011, 21:09:38 UTC
Most the time, I'm not terribly fond of the idea of Library AU's or fix-its, since the Library seems such an intrinsic element of River/Doctor... But this was really great. I love how you handled it. I love the humor and the flashes of seriousness. I love how you handled the bit about River supposedly being out of regenerations. And then the ending line about a geography teacher. Ha! Great prompt response.

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honeynoir October 16 2011, 21:47:05 UTC
I'm not terribly fond of the idea of Library AU's or fix-its, since the Library seems such an intrinsic element of River/Doctor.
I'm not either, usually; I think the canon ending is fab. I was drawn to this prompt because... where do you go when the Library isn't final? How does the dynamic change? What about all of the characterisation ever? Obvs about 1% of what I worked out actually showed up in the fic, but I enjoyed myself. *g*

The best geography teacher ever~

Thank you!

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promethia_tenk October 17 2011, 00:52:39 UTC
*points to cinderbella* What she said. Usually I am firmly in the "her ending was fabulous; stop trying to screw it up, everybody!" camp, but I actually . . . rather . . . love this? It's confusing to me : ) But you didn't undermine the intentions of anyone in that episode with this--there was just a fantastic accident that nobody could have counted on, and now River can go underground just like the Doctor.

And the humor and the warmth and the slightly bemused feeling of all of this was just right. Love the crack about how many times did he rehearse his line!

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honeynoir October 22 2011, 21:03:59 UTC
*late reply is super late*

I have such an enormous love for her ending, but it was fun trying thinking about other possibilities.

But you didn't undermine the intentions of anyone in that episode with this
*wipes brow* I was worried I'd mess the Doctor's motives up, but then I figured that Eleven, in that frame of mind, *would* retrieve the journal and then lurk in the shadows and watch.

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tasty_kate October 17 2011, 22:40:03 UTC
I. LOVE. THIS. Gosh, I hope something like this can happen...

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honeynoir October 22 2011, 20:49:28 UTC
It would be spectacular...

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