Anyone have time for a quick 'n dirty beta?

[honeylocusttree]

I've actually finished the draft on my Dissociate Identity Disorder fic. Now I kind of need some brave soul to look at it and point to all the parts that MAKE NO SENSE

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[salty_catfish]

I'd love to give it a read through! Well, I'm ESL and mostly proofread non-fiction, but it should suffice for spotting logic gaps, I think.
Or you could try at spn_betas. :)

[honeylocusttree]

I would be in your debt! (Rather work with someone I know and respect, anyhoo...and if you can proof nonfic, I'm sure this silly thing will cause no problems. XD)