Anyone have time for a quick 'n dirty beta?
I've actually finished the draft on my Dissociate Identity Disorder fic. Now I kind of need some brave soul to look at it and point to all the parts that MAKE NO SENSE.
I know they're there. I kind of...have a history. And given the nature of this story, I'd be very surprised if there weren't multiple areas where things need to be clarified.
Does anyone have a couple minutes to read it and spot for logic gaps and POV issues? I'm not looking for anything in-depth at this point--I just want to fix any big stuff that needs fixing right now. I'll fiddle with the rest of it later.
*makes Bambi eyes*
I know they're there. I kind of...have a history. And given the nature of this story, I'd be very surprised if there weren't multiple areas where things need to be clarified.
Does anyone have a couple minutes to read it and spot for logic gaps and POV issues? I'm not looking for anything in-depth at this point--I just want to fix any big stuff that needs fixing right now. I'll fiddle with the rest of it later.
*makes Bambi eyes*