Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Eight

[homespunfic]

Hi. You really don't want to read this chapter without having read the previous ones, or at least the last one, so here's the link to Chapter Seven
If you'd like to start at the beginning, here's Chapter One
Thanks!

Comments

[blugreendreams]

Poor Simon.

Assuming the Alliance offered money to the poor hwoon dan they flooded out.

::shakes head:: Will he ever learn?

invoking a new nightmare of sepsis and fever that Simon forced to the back of his mind.
I loved that line, it was *so* very Simon.

This fic depressess me, I will never write this well.

::salutes::

I salute you! And am terribly jealous.

Keep it up...:0)

[homespunfic]

Oh, please don't say that. We can't compare ourselves to other fic authors, I do it all the time, it's a bad trait. It's just sometimes there are days when it flows. Believe you me, it had taken me months to get this far with this story. Looooong torturous months, and that's only for the people who've had to listen to me whine about it.

I'll take the salute, thank you, glad you are enjoying. But don't you do that depressed thing. Don't you dare!

[blugreendreams]

No, not doing the depressed thing...not depressed.

Just kind of...I donno, still learning. And am impatient by nature.

Take it as a compliment, it means you're good. That's a good thing.

I'm shiny, didn't mean to make ya think I wasn't. :0)

Sorry.

[homespunfic]

Shiny! Keep at it. And thanks.

[dusty_fedora]

This is great! I love how it's written and the character seem so real.

And I'm guiltily confessing that I laughed too when Mal was shot by Simon, like terimaru did. I'm a huge fan of Mal, but the fact that he was just talking with Simon about similar matters like defending oneself by shooting people, I just couldn't help it!

But I sobered up and acted properly shocked and distressed. =P

Keep writing, 'cause it's just really, really shiny. =D

[homespunfic]

Thank you! (Sorry for the delayed response.) Nice comments are always appreciated. Glad you got a giggle before having to act properly distressed. :)