Shortish but hey, action! Thanks to MrFlyingFingers for the lovely tea and scones. Hope the stains come out.

( Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Fifteen )

Shortish compared to 13, and they're still in the house, and there's no action and much talking, but they wanted to include this part. Probably because it was the idea that started the whole story, although it has since been eclipsed by everything else going on. Funny how that works, huh ( Read more... )

I'm afraid this is quite a long chapter, but it insisted. I hope it makes sense.

( Chapter 13 )

Yeah, I know. Seven months.
So I'll do this:
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So much love to terimaru and browncoat_2x2. I don't know how you continue to put up with my whinging.

( Down the Rabbit Hole - Chapter Twelve )

It's called, "Oh just post something already!! It will never be perfect enough, just post it!"

To the relieved sighs of hfleming8, terimaru and browncoat_2x2, who have been angels of patience, I present Chapter Eleven. (I had to look back to see what chapter number this would be. After all it's only been two and a half months since Chapter Ten .) Roll over for the fake ( Read more... )

It takes a village to post a chapter! And this could never have been posted were it not for terimaru, browncoat_2x2, hfleming8, norwegianblue47 and mrflyingfingers who variously listened to the whining, read umpteen rewrites, cajoled, encouraged, commiserated, slapped upside the head, edited, cheerleaded (?) and otherwise offered insight. Having taxed their resources, I should start looking for a new ( Read more... )

Ginormous apologies for the delay. Even bigger apologies to browncoat_2x2 and terimaru for begging them for feedback weeks ago, and summarily blowing off much of their valid and excellent repairwork. Just know that this could have been better had I listened to them. They rock and I am just crazy and stubborn like that. After which I had the nerve to ask terimaru to look this ( Read more... )

Hi. You really don't want to read this chapter without having read the previous ones, or at least the last one, so here's the link to Chapter Seven
If you'd like to start at the beginning, here's Chapter One
Thanks!

( Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Eight )

Sometimes you just have to feel sorry for Simon.

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( Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Seven )

A rather short chapter, but it features the Mal Reynolds school of acting. And yes indeedy, you can roll over to read those insults.

If you've just joined us, here is the story so far:
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( Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapterette Six )