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tokyoemergency December 21 2008, 04:30:24 UTC
LOL velociraptor.

okay, off to read more. xD

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holykeebler216 December 21 2008, 19:39:13 UTC
lol i liked that part

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baby_buggs December 21 2008, 05:54:01 UTC
hahaha!!! This is fucking amazing. and I have to thank you becausse this was exactly what I was craving. some Eunhyuk and Tablso, so sex, some humor. you just made my day. I loved it, and it was a bit weird because i was listening to the most not hot sone, but this was amazing. XXDD

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holykeebler216 December 21 2008, 06:40:58 UTC
lol im glad ^^

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schm0use December 21 2008, 08:56:40 UTC
HANG ON. MUST GO OPEN NEW TAB SO I CAN COMMENT WHILE I FUCKING READ IT AGAIN.

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holykeebler216 December 21 2008, 09:00:37 UTC
loling at you.

this is what im doing.

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You don't even know. schm0use December 21 2008, 09:45:18 UTC
okay. are you ready for this comment (which i'm ACTUALLY SWITCHING UP MY USERPIC FOR OMG)? cuz its gonna be epik. (heh, see wut i did thar?)

ALRIGHT. *cracks knuckles* (i'm still shaking by the way, so forgive any typos)

“Be a velociraptor!” his little brother said.
HAHAHAHAHAHA i remember wen we came up with that and u were just like WTF. AND THEN U ADDED IT. SDLGKJA I LUV YOU. DYING.

sculpting the young minds of future generations, as his school likes to call it. He just calls it teaching.
LOLOL dying at this too. oh tablo. you and ur sarcasm.

(whenever he told this part of the story, everyone looked at him like he was paranoid, and there would be a break as he spent 5 minutes explaining that no, this student was actually the spawn of Satan in regards to getting people fired, and just listen.)
YOU DONT UNDERSTAND HOW HARD I LOL-ED. HAHAHAHAHAHA ITS SO PARANOID OMG HAHAHAHAHA.

ALSO, the entire dialogue between the voices in Tablo's head. LOVED IT.

And then, without warning, Tablo shivered.LOLZ so i giggled rite there. cuz i ( ... )

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Re: You don't even know. schm0use December 21 2008, 09:46:17 UTC
Tablo’s mind was hazy with heat and need, the aching pain in his pants nearly unbearable. He had to be sensible, he had to keep this from clouding his judgment, he had to-

Just then his mind went completely, strikingly blank as Eunhyuk bit down on the curve where neck meets shoulder, just a little harder than what was normal, not hard enough to break the skin, but certainly hard enough to bruise. And certainly hard enough to send a jolt of painful pleasure down Tablo’s frame.
lol, so, question. when you read my kyuhyuk, did you read that part that was like A MIRROR of this and go GTFO OF MY BRAIN. LOL cuz, it was like exactly the same HAHAHHA I LUV U and this. my mind. it's going numb. AGAIN.

K the tie. the bondage. THE THIS: The indecency of it all, of Eunhyuk’s hand pushing under his waistband, of the eighteen-year-old student of his standing between his parted legs, grinning at him wickedly; it all just sent Tablo’s pulse faster.
OH GOD YES. MINE TOO TABLO. MINE TOO.

okay, shit, paragraphs getting long. lets see...

“-moan for ( ... )

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loveslipped December 21 2008, 09:50:48 UTC
|DDD
so you know i love this.
just ugh. so fucking win jessica.
don't be IDEFK about it.
it's awesome and i want moarrr!!!

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holykeebler216 December 21 2008, 10:30:46 UTC
LOL you were the first one to get a look at it

and i just might write a sequel or a en-medias-res thingy
(i really just wanted to use that term)

im thinking about writing the backstory of the ninja!eunhae 3rd floor janitors closet episode. y/y? mebbeh.

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loveslipped December 21 2008, 11:07:58 UTC
doode i thought you were gonna let shauna know i read it first?

en-medias-res YES PLS

OH AND YES TO EUNHAE :DDDD

jeez woman you sure know how to make me excited

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fadedandinsane December 21 2008, 10:21:43 UTC
OMG I KEEP DELETING MY COMMENTS!

SPOT!
will read when children are not present

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holykeebler216 December 21 2008, 10:26:13 UTC
lol YES please do XD

it wass awkward writing this in the airport, i assume itd be awkward reading it around children XDD

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fadedandinsane December 22 2008, 19:14:30 UTC
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HORRIBLE YESTERDAY WAS! I HAD TO BABYSIT AND COULD NOT READ THE BLOHYUK PRONZ UNTIL TODAY!!! GODDAMMIT!!!

YOU ARE THE AWESOMEST PERSON ALIIIIIIIVE!!!!

I'M SOOOO HAEPPY RIIIIGHT NOOOOOWWWWW.... NOT EVEN KIDDING.
YOUR BLOHYUK PRONZ HAS MADE ME HAPPY IN WAYS THAT I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW WERE POSSIBLE! and that can be taken in anyway that you seem fit

AND IT'S PERFECTLY!FAIL TABLO IN ALL THE RIGHT SPOTS, AND EUNHYUKKIE IS SLUTTY IN WAYS THAT I NEVER IMAGINED HIM TO BE AND I FOUND THE NINJA!EUNHAE TOOO AND THERE WAS BONDAGE (YOU GET A ZILLIOIN POINTS FOR THAT, SRSLY)AND HYUKKIE TOTALLY JUST WANTED IN HIS PANTS AND OMG OMGOMGOMGOMOOMO I THINK I'M GOING TO GO SIT IN A CORNER AND CRY AND LAUGH TIL MY BRAIN FALLS OUT.

this comment fails to the max, but i'm too awed by your awesomeness to even try to comment properly.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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holykeebler216 December 24 2008, 10:04:02 UTC
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL THIS COMMENT IS LIKE THE OSMEST COMENT EVER (aside from schmouse's because well, that thing is like 3 pages long XD)

^_____________^

im glad to see you liked it!!
YOUR BLOHYUK PRONZ HAS MADE ME HAPPY IN WAYS THAT I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW WERE POSSIBLE! and that can be taken in anyway that you seem fit
AHAHAHA WHUT.

ooooh you found ninja!eunhae! 8D *claps*
LOL I THINK EVERYONES LIKE...SECRETLY CLOSET BONDAGE SHIPPERS AND FOR THAT I LOL. *hearts;

i hope your brain doesnt fall out ;___; you might need that later

your comment wins.
and makes me go like this: o(^____________^)o
i swear i dont look that weird when i do it...

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