Fanfiction: Names

Feb 06, 2012 20:43

Title: Names
Athour: anne85
Rating: PG
Word Count: 272
Summary: Watson thinks of all the names he's called.
Note:This is my first English Sherlock Holmes fanfic (since I am no native English speaker). It's not very long. I hope you enjoy it! Have fun! :-)
I hope I just did everything right with the tags and so on... o_O

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character: mary, character: holmes, rating: pg, character: lestrade, character: watson, fanfiction

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amaraal February 6 2012, 20:38:47 UTC
Not bad for a first attempt. Although I think, you mixed the times up a bit. 'Will he make it, doctor?' not would, and present and past tense. Don't ask me. I'm not a native, either :) Try the beta search.

Keep on writing nonetheless! The fic itself is beautiful ;)

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anne85 February 6 2012, 20:42:29 UTC
Thanks a lot! I just edited it! ;-)
Aw, I'm always mixing up the times...*rolleyes* I hope it's better now. ;-)
Thanks again! :-)

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amaraal February 7 2012, 10:46:15 UTC
Don't mention it :) Happens to me all the times *g*, too. And I think it is 'tense', as in 'present tense', 'past tense'... My! One should have learned it properly in school, huh?
Love your icon :)

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anne85 February 7 2012, 11:09:33 UTC
Yes, I should have paid more attention to this, too ... ;-)
Thanks! I love yours, too! Did you make it yourself?

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bradygirl_12 February 7 2012, 01:06:01 UTC
What a sweet little story! I love the idea of only one person calling someone by a particular name. It's special. :)

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anne85 February 7 2012, 07:31:02 UTC
Thank you! :-)
So I thought as well. ;-)

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vsee February 7 2012, 11:24:47 UTC
Sweet! Hope you write more.

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anne85 February 7 2012, 14:21:25 UTC
Thanks! :-)
Hopefully my Muse will enlighten me once more. ;-)
(But I fear I first have to finish my German stories...)

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ewanspotter February 8 2012, 05:53:15 UTC
Lovely!

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anne85 February 8 2012, 08:51:24 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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gingetsu February 8 2012, 16:12:00 UTC
I really hadn't given much thought to that idea, of Holmes being the only person calling Watson... well, Watson. But you should see the silly grin I have on my face right now <3

This was the sweetest thing, really. And I hope you write more :D

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anne85 February 8 2012, 22:28:46 UTC
Thank you! That's so kind of you. :-)
Glad you like it! :-)

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