Fic for mistyzeo: The Strange Case of the Ruby Crucifix

Dec 11, 2010 10:40

Title: The Strange Case of the Ruby Crucifix
Author: mainecoon76
Recipient: mistyzeo
Characters/Pairings: H/W, ACD’s canon. Lestrade sticks around a lot.
Rating: R for non-explicit violence and sex
Warnings: Very slight spoilers for Bram Stoker’s “Dracula”, but really not much more than common vampire clichés.
Summary: A politician dies, Lestrade hunts for ( Read more... )

character: lestrade, 2010: gift: fic, source: acd canon, pairing: holmes/watson

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bugeyedmonster December 13 2010, 00:57:30 UTC
Good fic. Spent time reading this when I should have been cleaning or making Christmas cards. Argh!

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mainecoon76 January 6 2011, 12:57:33 UTC
Thanks! And I sympathize. I also spent a lot of time reading holmestice fics instead of writing Christmas cards (not to mention cleaning...).

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silver_cyanne December 13 2010, 20:10:15 UTC
Established relationships are my favorite and I just love how you wrote them. I also really liked the way they talk about their age and about when/if it's time to retire. Very realistic and very well done.

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mainecoon76 January 6 2011, 13:06:26 UTC
I love established relationships, too; there are still so many possibilities once one is past the point of "how do they end up in bed together?" :)
I'm happy you like it, and thanks for commenting!

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mrs_sweetpeach January 6 2011, 15:56:21 UTC
Yay! Reveals are over and you've posted it!

It's a delight to see this again.

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mainecoon76 January 8 2011, 16:29:39 UTC
Yes, and it really was a lot of fun!

Thanks again for helping me with this - it's definitely much better now!
:-)

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darthhellokitty January 6 2011, 18:08:51 UTC
This is really good! I'll be looking out for more from you!

I liked the incorporation of things from BBC - Anderson (ha!) and Holmes being strangled with his scarf. :-)

The vampire theme was also very clever - everyone was reading "Dracula" at the time, and our heroine may have been the 19th century equivalent of a "Twihard". XD

The romance between Holmes and Watson is very well done - I like their attempts at being subtle, but I'm glad you mentioned that Lestrade knew, because he'd have to be very un-observant not to. :-)

a couple of little things:

the prospect on an interesting - of
one member of the cleaning personal - personnel
“are you going to allow him to desegregate the grave?” - desecrate
tools for the desegregation of the body - desecration

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mainecoon76 January 8 2011, 17:02:13 UTC
I liked the incorporation of things from BBC...

Yes, it works both ways! :-)

...our heroine may have been the 19th century equivalent of a "Twihard". XD

Yes, yes, exactly! I was thinking along those lines, though not of the modern analogy... *lol*
Of course the vampire theme had everything to do with the fact that I was reading Dracula myself and it practically suggested itself as an inspiration.

I like their attempts at being subtle, but I'm glad you mentioned that Lestrade knew, because he'd have to be very un-observant not to.

If Lestrade hadn't known, they would have had to be a lot more subtle. *nods*

As to the typos, thanks! These things happen even with a very observant beta (and in case you're wondering why there are not so much typos but blatant misspellings - I'm not a native speaker). Trouble is that I have no writing access for this community, so I'll have to bother the mods...

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it! :-)

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lavvyan January 8 2011, 17:37:26 UTC
Trouble is that I have no writing access for this community, so I'll have to bother the mods...

That's what we're here for, though. :)

Typos taken care of, in any case.

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mainecoon76 January 10 2011, 11:04:07 UTC
Once again, you are amazing! :)

Thank you!

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mainecoon76 January 10 2011, 15:50:55 UTC
Oh yes. BBC Sherlock is lovely, but there can never be enough canon fic. Or art, for that matter. ;)
Glad you enjoyed it!

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