Fic: A Big Bad Girl in the Big Bad World

[hollywood_r_bin]

Title: A Big Bad Girl in the Big Bad World
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Andrea Rojas/Lucy Lane
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: For "Lucy" and" Vengeance"
Summary: The world is a dangerous place... even for vigilantes
Word: 3511
Disclaimer: I own nothing and got nothing to give you if you sue me.
Note: Written for the prompts "Suicide Slums" and "Vigilante". This

Comments

[enderwiggin24]

wow, that ending hit me like a punch in my guts!
I was all over this "She was no longer looking at the innocent and naive little rich girl who had been her companion for the past fifteen minutes. All of that icing had melted away and there, clad in a short white dress and pink designer jacket too thin for the night, was a woman, a woman who had seen the world for what it is, seen too much of it. There wasn't an ounce of youth left in the depths of those bright blue eyes." and how perfectly you have captured the change of Andrea, the BOOM lex came along, and was in together with lucy!
hellish impressive!

[hollywood_r_bin]

*is flattered* Thank you, and thanks for reading it. I'm glad you liked it, especially that part, with Lucy. The initial version had Lucy blacked mailed by Lex into working and she was much more the victim but I think this one gives it a lot more layers.

[enderwiggin24]

absolutely, about the additional layers, because she was not being blackmailed into it by lex!

btw, I just saw this, not sure if you know about it already, but there arent that many femslash coms as there are the usual slash coms:
http://community.livejournal.com/cross_my_heart/profile

[hollywood_r_bin]

No, i don't know about it, but then SV isn't a big femme place and i haven't really written any crossovers. I intend to though, just never got to it.

[nsargentxox]

wow didn't think that Lucy was playing a part, it seemed all genuine for a minute. Great fic, I liked the way you wrote Lucy, it was perfect.

[hollywood_r_bin]

Thank you! *beams* Yay! a comment!! *dances* And thank you :) I like writing this pair, I think this is the only SV femme fic I wrote so far without Lana in it :p I'm pretty Lana obsessed. And anyway Lucy was genuine during and before she kissed Andrea. The initialy draft had a very different Lucy, she was instead blackmailed into helping Lex and was more of a victim but this versions' way more fun to write.

[midnight_tides]

I like the conversational banter and stereotypical "hero swoops in to save day" start - very Smallville, I could easily imagine that entire thing playing in my head like an episode - which is a good effect, mmmyes? I liked it anyway. XD

In all, a most amusing read, mmmyes. Thanks for pimping this ^^
...although I have to say that I laughed a bit at the idea of Lex taking Lucy's threat seriously (well, letting her get away with it) but then I guess he wasn't quite so ruthless back when he was running 33.1...

[hollywood_r_bin]

Yes, Lex wasn't as ruthless back then, i knew it was kind of a stretch but i needed to make that for the story. Initial versions had Lex blackmail Lucy into helping him, making her the victim but that didn't work out so well in the end so i had to change it.

Also I kinda made Lucy's reputation better (as in more infamous) in this one as well. Lucy is usually much more cold but her crush on Andrea is real, and she's not used to having actual feelings for someone besides her family at this point due to her career choice.