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Breaking Lessons

Jun 14, 2008 12:14

Title: Breaking Lessons
Author: LoveAngel2141
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Zack Fair & Cloud Strife
Written For: 10_themes - Prompt Table Two - Excitement
Word Count: 914
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: The sound had been loud before, but now it was almost deafening. Even from the living room Cloud knew whatever it was that was currently contained in the bedroom was most ( Read more... )

zack fair, final fantasy 7, 10_themes, cloud strife

Comments 17

rainbowserenity June 14 2008, 20:36:12 UTC

HOLY CRAP. xDDDDDD
That was just so unbelieveably PERFECT! *flail* Everything from Zack jumping on the bed 'CAUSE IT'S FUN to Cloud's reaction and Zack breaking ceiling was just all so perfectly epic. xDDD This seems like it should've been a hidden DMW scene, fangirl eyes only! >3

Oh Cloud. You just can't stay mad at that puppy face. You've always got to put up with it, even when Zack's going around acting like he's five but proving his not by putting a hole in the place. Sigh. xD

Your level of epic has shot up to a gazillion with this fic, I hope you know that! >D ♥

hollow_strife June 15 2008, 06:10:22 UTC

Thank you hon. Your comments always make me smile. Seriously.

Yeah I know right? But Square was probably worried about fan girls every where suing them from the heart attacks they would be having from the complete and utter over dose of CUTE!

I don't honestly think that I would be able to stay mad at Zack's little puppy dog face either. I mean, seriously. I would probably just melt into a huge pile of goo and be done with it.

Thank you sweetie! Really. And I'm not sure if my level of epic should be quite that high, but thank you very much for making me feel a lot better just by saying that. Unfortunately for us I'm not quite sure if this is going to spin off any epic icons or not LOL

rainbowserenity June 15 2008, 22:34:37 UTC

Aww, I'm glad! ^^

Either that or we'd all have a hundred times more cavities from tooth-rotting fluff. BUT SQUEENIX, TOOTH-ROTTING FLUFF IS MY FAVORITE KIND! YOU CAN'T DENY US!
...Wait, they're Squeenix. Yes they can. HMPH.

You and me both. ♥ I need to practice it for when I cosplay as Zack, but I could definitely never get it down as well as he does. OH ZACKY. You own my soul. ♥

Ohohoho trust me, it should totally be that high! >D And well, it may not spin off any epic icons, but it certainly does spin off epic mental images. :D ♥

hollow_strife June 16 2008, 07:24:23 UTC

thank you hon! Appartently I do really well with the cute!

And they can deny us, otherwise you know, Zack would never have died and we wouldn't have to pyut with annoying ass Tifa all the way through Advent Children. You know, because Zack would have been there to tell here "Back off you bitch! He's mine!"

Your going to cosplay as Zack? There's going to be pictures of this right? So I can squee over you even more? And seriously, your level of epic win just went through the roof!

Well thank you sweetie! I'm just glad you liked it!

and I still have to steal that icon!

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hollow_strife June 15 2008, 06:11:05 UTC

Aw thank you very much! I had a good laugh while writing it, so I'm glad if I could make you laugh as well!

fantasia0829 June 15 2008, 15:12:13 UTC

That's so totally adorable! XD Hee hee, usually Cloud's the one who needs Zack's help, but I see you've turned the tables around. XDD

Anyway, I just noticed a small mistake. You wrote 'Solider' instead of 'Soldier'. :D

hollow_strife June 15 2008, 18:02:36 UTC

Thank you for pointing that out. I can't believe it got past me and my beta. Thank you for your comments as well! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

_greatguitarsex June 16 2008, 09:19:39 UTC

Lmfao, stubborn characters are always the most hilarious and this was ridiculous amounts of cute hun. :D

_greatguitarsex June 16 2008, 09:20:46 UTC

I also forgot to mention how much I love how appropriate the title is. ;D

hollow_strife June 16 2008, 09:24:17 UTC

Thank you sweetie, considering I had no flipping clue on what to name it.

And now I shall comence killing your in box with all my responses....

hollow_strife June 16 2008, 09:23:20 UTC

Heh thank you! Appartently I'm really good at writing the cuteness!

And that hottie in your icon is Joe right? (At least I think so. I've been trying to remember which one is which.)

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mako_pretty June 27 2008, 07:10:31 UTC

If there was a fic that I would pick to represent 'Clack' to the world, this would be it! I loved this one, it is seriously cute!

"I know exactly how old I am, Spike. This, however, is fun."
Those are words to live by, seriously!

hollow_strife June 27 2008, 07:14:48 UTC

Thank you so much for that hon! Seriously! And jumping on the bed is fun! I'd do it but I'd probably get screamed at, so I'll just leave it up to Zack for right now!