Hello! You understood right, yes. I don't think Samuel and Dave are as loud as Robert would like to believe-he's definitely listening more than he wants to admit! Also Samuel is very much not the noisy type, nor is he as much THE ENEMY as Robert would like to believe. He's more quiet and so worried about what other people think than arrogant-Robert just sees him in the worst possible light because he's got what Robert wants. Or almost.
Definately. Though a biased pov does tend to increase the angst. If you are interested (and can stand the angst..) I'm working on a sequel of sorts, in which we see things a little clearer (or from Dave's pov anyway) Samuel redeems himself and Sophie plays the part of THE ENEMY. I'll post it in my journal once it's complete.
Welcome new poster! And such a cute little story you have brought! Poor Robert, having to hear them through the wall, his little heart breaking every time!
I see you have discovered that all challenges are always open. Feel free to write for any and all. And, as Dibs noted above, you can use the tags multiple times for sequels or new stories from the same prompt.
Also, I keep a folder in the memories for each of the authors. I have started your folder, and hope to add more to it as you write and post. ^___^
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I like this you should share some more :) welcome to the group.
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I'm so pleased someone liked this.
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You understood right, yes.
I don't think Samuel and Dave are as loud as Robert would like to believe-he's definitely listening more than he wants to admit!
Also Samuel is very much not the noisy type, nor is he as much THE ENEMY as Robert would like to believe. He's more quiet and so worried about what other people think than arrogant-Robert just sees him in the worst possible light because he's got what Robert wants. Or almost.
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If you are interested (and can stand the angst..) I'm working on a sequel of sorts, in which we see things a little clearer (or from Dave's pov anyway) Samuel redeems himself and Sophie plays the part of THE ENEMY. I'll post it in my journal once it's complete.
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I see you have discovered that all challenges are always open. Feel free to write for any and all. And, as Dibs noted above, you can use the tags multiple times for sequels or new stories from the same prompt.
Also, I keep a folder in the memories for each of the authors. I have started your folder, and hope to add more to it as you write and post. ^___^
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