Concrit Post 5

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[starfruits]

discedo

Lavi | D.Gray-Man | secrethistorian
Hayner | Kingdom Hearts II | seasaltsnack
Zim | Invader Zim | germphobic
Chrona | Soul Eater | mr_corner_n_me

Previous/Dropped :

Son Goku | Saiyuki | donotwantfan
Zidane Tribal | FFIX | cryoutmyname
Dominic Sorel | Eureka Seven | map_fail_quest

[cesia]

Road icon not fitting? :/

I... have nothing worth saying that is concrit, and everything else should be said in the RP Love Meme, and not here orz. Anyway, your Lavi is one of the best ones I know, and I should interact with him more.

[starfruits]

LOL w-well that's my default and I was like I WANNA USE A DIFFERENT OOONE and it ended up being Kid's "UUUGGGHHH EXCALIBUR THAT LOSER" face >w>;;

I should go recheck that, I just kind've left it alone ffffffffff

I-I'm glad to hear that! <333

[cesia]

ffff /hugs

Aw well, me too. I'm at the back, so I've looked through it all xD

♥

[drcanadianninja]

memento_eden

frumpyface - Erk, Fire Emblem
nagatodotexe - Yuki Nagato, Mealncholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
fadetonigredo - Gaignun Kukai, Xenosaga
aperfectcycle - Wilhelm, Xenosaga
hermeticheart - Raven, Tales of Vesperia

mayfield_rpg

foremostpatriot - Big Boss, Metal Gear Solid
allthingstodust - chaos, Xenosaga

Museboxed

blahblahblahdie - Rita Mordio, Tales of Vesperia
thatbonjovisong - Yeager, Tales of Vesperia

[el_hustino]

Buuuuh, can't really think of anything, even with the two characters I know from canon. You're doing really well with Yuki considering how talkative she is and I love her interactions with Fate.

Erk's...frankly, I never thought Erk as being all that interesting in the game beyond dealing with Serra while straight-faced, but I like what you've done with him, even if he's a her now. He's interesting and fun.

As for actual advice or criticism...Uh. Be a little more careful with your apping and dropping, I guess? That seems like a cop-out since I'm pretty sure you're aware of your habit, but that's all I got.

[frumpyface]

Now that you've brought it up, I'd like you to elaborate a bit on that. Is Yuki talking too much or has it hit a sort of happy medium?

Thank you! I think I'm a bit all over the place with him at times, but it's good to hear that. Thanks!

As for the apping and dropping, it was more apping on a whim, dropping to app on a whim, or in some cases, re-apping because I have a harder time dealing with pressure than I should. I think I've hit a nice zone where I don't really want to app or drop anyone, though, so hopefully it won't be an issue.

[el_hustino]

I haven't seen the anime for about a year now, but I think Yuki's talking the right amount, particularly when she's trying to gather information; her entire existence is supposed to be to gather information, after all, so it's natural for her to have questions and be curious.

[cesia]

Wow. I wonder how much I've played since the last meme |D

@ laststopgakuen
Kanda Yuu (D.Gray-man) | yuu_yu_na
Mikoto Yutaka (Princess • Princess) | lawlitsatrap
Schuldig (Weiss Kreuz) | blame_the_devil
Rath Illuser (Dragon Knights) | mrdarkntortured
Haine Rammsteiner (DOGS) | idkmybffernest

@ toujourshotel
Kanda Yuu (D.Gray-man) | makeslotusmanly
Nunnally vi Britannia (Code Geass) | forthward
Fai D. Flourite (Tsubasa: RESERVoir CHRoNiCLE») | equivocating

@ discedo
Kanda Yuu (D.Gray-man) | unfriendlydots

@ campfuckudie
Aizawa Kouichi (Nabari no Ou) | immortowl
Schuldig (Weiss Kreuz) | youschuldblame

@ crucible_rpg
Kanda Yuu (D.Gray-man) | unsupportive

@ super_powers (just got sort of back into things, so still a bit flaky)
Fai D. Flourite (Tsubasa: RESERVoir CHRoNiCLE) | lulz_mage

@

[airpress]

...the short time i played with your kanda, i must say that i enjoyed it. you balanced his snarky attitude with whatever the situation was. and call me biased, but i like playing rabi with a kanda that doesn't just kick him in the nuts and is all >:| at him, but rather strive around a more.. normal... sort of... same-age-friendship thing, YOUKNOWUH. B( ♥

[cesia]

Kicking Lavi in the nuts isn't going to make him smarter except for a few rare moments when Kanda actually FEELS like it. AND YEAH THEY ARE SUPPOSED TO BE SOME SORT OF NOT!BFF's in where Kanda is in denial, of course. Your Lavi is great in that way that he doesn't make Kanda want to kick him in the nuts all too often |Db

Ffff thank you, honey ♥ /drapes

[polycistronic]

Derp this isn't really a crit buuut. I still loved playing with your Rath in toujours. and secretly want to play with him again with Kharrrl.

But uh...yeah! This crit kinda failed. Sorry. )x All in all I think you do wonderfully with Rath! And it was enjoyable to play with you when we had both of them interacting~

[ration]

Juuuust @ discedo

Reno | nomakothx | Final Fantasy VII
Raiden | lightningreborn | Metal Gear Solid

Also I have Jackisnomore at absolute_hold, but he's pretty much dead atm so...

[church_man]

Wait, you're at AT again? I DID NOT KNOW THIS.

[ration]

Why did I not get a notif on this YES I AM.

[wintersong]

memento_eden
Maka Albarn (Soul Eater) - chop-meister
Arya Stark (A Song of Ice and Fire) - fearcutsdeeper
Pearl Fey (Ace Attorney) - nickandmaya4eva

I live off crit, seriously. Be as harsh as you want, you won't offend me.

[el_hustino]

Honestly, the biggest piece of criticism I have concerns activity. Your characterization is fine for both Pearl and Maka--the only two of the three I'm familiar with--but the lack of activity hurts them.

They're both very friendly characters and Pearl in particular is not afraid to talk to people and ask them things; activity isn't always an integral part of characterization, but I feel like they miss so many posts that they would comment on that it DOES hurt them.

Beyond that, they are spot on.

[wintersong]

Thank you thank you thank you. I will definitely keep that in mind. I try, but it seems like the amount of free time I have in comparison to most of the other players is pretty small D:

I WILL TRY MY BEST 83b