Concrit Post 4

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[houndartemis]

microcosm_rp
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Bigby Wolf (noirwolf)
The Corinthian (eyesmiles)
The Monarch (monarch_the)

[hotandcoldrp]

Hit me.

@memento_eden
a_scented_blade- Tsubaki Nakatsukasa from Soul Eater
future_is_gold- Booster Gold from DC Comics
semper_fi_bitch- Sgt. Dexter Grif from Red vs. Blue

@netherworld_rpg
crimsonmantled- Redcloak from The Order of the Stick
memoryisthekey- Agent Washington from Red vs. Blue
randomly_ironic- Random Hajile from Snatcher

[yougongetsarged]

Grif is oh-oh-see for not being injured frequently or severely enough! I demand you correct this oversight!

[not_4oclock]

Oh oh pick me I can help oh pick me

[magicbloomers]

I never have crit for you. You're really really good! Be more confident in your Tsubaki, I've yet to see a single instance where she doesn't seem totally spot on to me.

[obliviomancy]

polychromatic
obliviomancy - Kingdom Hearts - Roxas
onlyteasing - D.Gray-Man - Tyki Mikk

crucible_rpg
exstinctor - D.Gray-Man - Tyki Mikk

Am I on the first page? Why am I on the first page?

[ideally_awesome]

netherworld_rpg

Mod
Laharl (Disgaea) overlordinate
Sarge (Red vs. Blue) yougongetsarged

memento_eden

Laharl (Disgaea) yournewoverlord
Axel (Disgaea 2) garbage_phoenix
Chrona (Soul Eater) mybloodis_black

srw_unlimited

Kurtis (Disgaea) robot_penguin
Kittan Bachika (Gurren Lagann) k_alliteration
Heero Yuy (Gundam Wing) an_heero
Nono (Diebuster) no_no_really

That list is short a couple of characters I'm definitely going to drop very soon to help my activity, which brings up the fact that I know I'm not as active as I could be. Other than that, open fire.

Re: Am I on the first page? Why am I on the first page?

[hotandcoldrp]

Your Sarge is spot fucking on. Like, I mean there's spot on, and then there's spot fucking on, and then there's your Sarge, being spot fucking on. The only crit I can think of for Sarge is that you didn't app him at ME you jerk.

...Uh, yeah, that's all I got for you, man.

[ideally_awesome]

Because BLUES IN HELL, woman!

[hotandcoldrp]

Excuses. 8|

[totallynotaspaz]

ONLY THE COOL KIDS COMMENT IN RP JOURNALS.

totallynotaspaz--Danny Fenton/Phantom
to_ler_ate--Lambo

Both are at memento_eden.

And seriously. If I'm doing something wrong, tell me. Because I don't flail at crit, I love crit, and I'll accept any crit people have for me.

[hotandcoldrp]

Danny and Grif need to get themselves into some sort of horrible trouble via pranking, I don't even know what, but this needs to happen.

This is not actually crit, but the idea stands.

[totallynotaspaz]

Do you mean pranking each other, or both of them pranking someone else...?

I also find it very amusing how a 14-year-old and...how old IS he a 27-year-old are about on the same level of maturity.

[hotandcoldrp]

I was thinking them pranking someone else who would most certainly not appreciate it together, but each other works, too, I guess.

I put 26 on my app, but close. Grif is totally mature, I don't know what you're talking about. :|