Concrit Post 4

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

Am I on the first page? Why am I on the first page?

[ideally_awesome]

netherworld_rpg

Mod
Laharl (Disgaea) overlordinate
Sarge (Red vs. Blue) yougongetsarged

memento_eden

Laharl (Disgaea) yournewoverlord
Axel (Disgaea 2) garbage_phoenix
Chrona (Soul Eater) mybloodis_black

srw_unlimited

Kurtis (Disgaea) robot_penguin
Kittan Bachika (Gurren Lagann) k_alliteration
Heero Yuy (Gundam Wing) an_heero
Nono (Diebuster) no_no_really

That list is short a couple of characters I'm definitely going to drop very soon to help my activity, which brings up the fact that I know I'm not as active as I could be. Other than that, open fire.

Re: Am I on the first page? Why am I on the first page?

[hotandcoldrp]

Your Sarge is spot fucking on. Like, I mean there's spot on, and then there's spot fucking on, and then there's your Sarge, being spot fucking on. The only crit I can think of for Sarge is that you didn't app him at ME you jerk.

...Uh, yeah, that's all I got for you, man.

[ideally_awesome]

Because BLUES IN HELL, woman!

[hotandcoldrp]

Excuses. 8|

[el_hustino]

I can't believe I'm saying this, but.

Do more with Axel.

[ideally_awesome]

That falls under activity!

I should resume planning The Play.

[mockeryx]

Like said above your Sarge is SPOT fucking on! That's all I've got too.

Re: Am I on the first page? Why am I on the first page?

[doublekill]

idk who you are but you rock for playing Sarge. If all these people are telling the truth that your sarge is spot on, I might just have to beg you to come join our rvb crew. We have enough blues.