Concrit Post 19

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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[hoshi3]

Adstringéndum
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Niteo Nix
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→ Libitina | NPC | mysteriouswhite

Orochimaru's Agenda
→ Uchiha Sasuke ['AU'] | Naruto | crimsonheir | journal hmd

Inactive/dropped/dear_mun/etc. here, as always.

Any and all crit welcome guys. Hit me with what you've got ♥

ffff, first.

[bloodseal_soul]

Wow, you ninja'd right into that there. :|b

I have nothing more than puns today.

[theloneheir]

I'm working a garage sale and dead bored >:

[k0koro_kara]

How are you always first?

Kinda pointless by now, since scarcely anyone ever replies to mine, but whatever

[perfectrecord]

At damned:

Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): perfectrecord
He also has an anon-enabled, IP-logging-disabled HMD entry at the top of his journal, his tracking post (updated today) is here should you need it, and here's some head canon stuff I recently posted, that you're welcome to nitpick away at.

Homeless/fountainofcod/dear_mun/etc.:

Mike Meekins (Ace Attorney): dork_at_duty
The Judge (Ace Attorney): judgey_udgey
Lucca (Chrono Trigger); guns_n_glasses
Nabooru (The Legend of Zelda); sage_of_spirit
Tasslehoff Burrfoot (Dragonlance): not_a_cutpurse

And anyone else not mentioned that you know of is fair game. You can also leave crit for them here at my all-purpose concrit post, also anon-enabled and IP-logging-disabled.

As always, I welcome crit on anything, both anon and logged-in. I'm especially interested in ICness and writing, and especially whether I've improved on the tl;dr issue that was pointed out in some of von Karma's prose tags. (I've been working on cutting that down; how's that been working out so far?) I know my biggest issue is that of activity, so any tips on how to improve that in the face of lack of motivation and

not pointless. B|

[oftemptation]

I think you're as IC as ever -- which is to say excellently so. And I've noticed the paring down on the tl;dr, and that's a really good improvement.

As for activity - I do have a suggestion, but I'll grab you privately about it. Nothing bad, I promise, just something that doesn't need to be splashed out here. <333

Pffffff <3

[perfectrecord]

Thanks, bb. <3 I'm very glad to hear that because believe me, he's one tough bastard to play and difficult to keep IC at times. XD;;; And I'm especially glad to hear that the needless tl;dr has indeed been cut down, because that's not an easy thing for me to do when I'm just pounding out tags and getting them written up.

We've already discussed the activity issue offline, but thanks so much for the suggestion on that, too. <33333 I appreciate it.

[redmoonmurder]

@amatomnes
Kira Sakuya / fatedrebellion / Angel Sanctuary
Mad Moxxi / swflooking4str / Borderlands

@holyrelic
Takeshi Gouda / lookslikemomo / Kimi wa Pet (mangaverse)

[redmoonmurder]

you don't know me, but I adore and admire your Kira so much. It makes me wish I hadn't gotten cold feet to app Michael :(

[fatedrebellion]

Aaaah anon! I don't think I deserve your adoration and admiration, but thank you! ;o; ♥ And I hope you get the courage to app Michael! I'm 100% positive you'll do great!

[wafflehearts]

@ campfuckudie
Aizawa Kouichi | (Nabari no Ou) immortowl
Schuldig | (Weiss Kreuz) youschuldblame
Rath Illuser | (Dragon Knights) killerofademon
Amasawa Chitose | (The Weatherman is My Lover) weatherfairy
Jo Carpenter | (Bakuretsu Tenshi) tsungunfire
Cyborg #18 | (Dragon Ball Z) pwntryinmotion
Eclipse | (Demon Diary) demonesticate
Shigeka Narushige | (Silver Diamond) koudependent
Ash | (The Tarot Café) odiousialist
Earth [Kirigi] | (Ark Angels) pandoraboxed
Kakei | (Legal Drug) pharmanoncon
Riddle | (Sougiya Riddle) withcondolences

@ stedelweiss
Kanda Yuu | (D.Gray-man) sobalicious

@ demeleier
Nunnally vi Britannia | (Code Geass) forthward

@ dirtyvegasrp
Ash | (The Tarot Café) invidciously

[momentarily]

Okay, first thing's first: my activity has been completely and utterly horrendous; I am aware of this. August has been an incredibly awkward month for me personally, and September should get better, I hope.

homeless/dressing rooms etc.
Simm!Master | andvainglorious | Doctor Who | Anon enabled, IP/screening off crit post
fjkslg still heading to Damned at some point; his app will be sent in for the October app round. See: comment re: August and its horrificness.

Koschei | isinterfering | Doctor Who |
Yeah, I'll be honest, I'm not really sure what I'm doing; I'm pretty new to playing him.

Xerxes Break | allmoveone | Pandora Hearts | Anon enabled, IP/screening off crit post
I'm thinking of picking him up again, actually -- once I've caught up with ...months of the series.

Shaz Granger | notatory | Ashes to Ashes | Anon enabled, IP/screening off crit post

discedo.
The Doctor (Eight) | misremembers | Doctor Who: Eighth Doctor Adventures (novels) | Anon enabled, IP /screening off crit post
NGL, I'll probably be dropping him.And I still need to come off hiatus at Amat, so I'm leaving that off at

[notapsychopath]

I play the Rani and Lucy, so I'm not just stalking your DW pups around SWS with Sherlock, promise. :)

1) Your grown-up Master is brilliant. I used to play the Master and I still get incredibly grumpy when I see bad interpretations of him xD Be happy, he is fantastic.

2) Just the fact that you play Koschei, Shaz and Eight fills me with joy. I've threaded a little with Koschei and I think he's excellent.

[momentarily]

Oh my gosh, you're not the Rani that I threaded with a few times and then ... I kind of disappeared on for a while because what is life, are you? IF YOU ARE I FEEL REALLY BAD 8( If not, just ignore me jgkdl

1) Aaah, thank you so much! If there were a less corny way to go ':D' on the internet, I WOULD BE DOING IT NOW. Instead you get ':D'. And yes, aah, I kind of go 'D:' when I see bad interpretations of the Master as well, so I'm glad mine isn't too shoddy!

2) Well, in the case of Shaz and definitely, definitely Eight, it's more 'tries to play'. Eight is so hard to play D: But thank you so much! I'm kind of worried that I make Koschei a little ... too grumpy? But I somewhat base my interpretation off of what appears in the really, really terrible novel The Dark Path and to a certain extent, the BFA 'Master', but the circumstances of 'Master' compared to general ...RP'ing, particularly Academy!era are a little different, so-- YOU'RE PROBABLY NOT INTERESTED AT ALL SO YES, thank you! I'm glad you like how I play him!

Also, I've seen

[notapsychopath]

I'm ladyinalabcoat, although I don't keep up with her as much as I used to :)

I am interested! <3 Gallifrey and Academy headcanon is some of my favourite headcanon evar. I could talk about it for ridiculous lengths >_> Although I've never read the Dark Path or heard 'Master'.

Aw, thank you <33 If you ever want to brush up, the original ACD books are public domain, so you can find them on the internet for free. Not that I do this to recap, what what. It's not as nice as having a real book, but there are definitely words, in the right order, telling the same story 8D Moar Sherlock characters is ALWAYS a good thing.

Also. Also. Jarvis. Oh, Jarvis. <3