Concrit Post 16

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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[pretending]

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ROLO LAMPEROUGE 〔 ＣＯＤＥ　ＧＥＡＳＳ　Ｒ２ 〕 ➠ anon enabled hmd■ I've been told that I tend to post too much, so I'm going to be working on cutting back for that! Last time, an issue was alienating CR/keeping consistent with CR. Not only that, but I've been working on this, so have I kept up with that? I'm also working on a big plot with the police right now involving Rolo and the Umineko cast. I'm trying to make sure ICA = ICC, but I struggle with trying to get a different perspective other than Rolo's. So tips on that would be appreciated too!
MINATSUKI TAKAMI 〔 ＤＥＡＤＭＡＮ　ＷＯＮＤＥＲＬＡＮＤ 〕 ➠ anon enabled hmd■ She's still kinda new to me, and I feel shaky, but I'm trying to get her out anymore. Any tips would be appreciated.
GAAP 〔 ＵＭＩＮＥＫＯ 〕 ➠ anon enabled hmd■ Still working on activity for this one! I think I'm doing a little better. I just hope I kept true to her in her last post and the big Dinner Thread.

Holycrap, I got first? x_x

LMAO THIS PROBABLY DOESN'T MAKE SENSE.

[signifies]

What I love about your Rolo is that you see that cute moe side of him in public, and he really is cute and moe to those who don't know the real him. There's just no underlying sneakiness to be caught, even though he is a little bitch. And then there's that hideous and amazing darker side of him that shows what kind of person he really is on the inside, and just. The way you handle that, balancing the two sides of him and whatnot, is just wonderful to watch. Also, his angsting over not having a Lelouch on the island is always heartbreaking to watch, and it shows a little that he's still human, deep, deep, deep down inside of him.

For Minatsuki I just love watching you play her. She's is kinda of a more extreme version of Rolo, so I can understand that perhaps she's hard to pull of, but it's amazing. Her transition from the small cute girl into the psychotic bitch she really is was astounding to watch, and though I personally thought you pulled her out of her pretense a little too early, your explanation in the hmd post at Amat was

NO IT DOES I'M JUST GOING TO FLAIL A LITTLE HERE

[pretending]

as;dlgkhas;dlkgh///////////// WAH

Th-THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'm glad that you enjoy them. I do put a lot of work so sometimes I get a little exhausted, haha. But to see other people enjoy reading my characters makes it so worthwhile (aside from the part where I have fun too). BUT YES. Thank you!

And yeah, I kinda agree about the Mina part. I regret pulling her so early, even if I made the choice ahead of time. If I play her somewhere else, I think things might end up a bit differently.

[loisneach]

I am not a Rolo fan at all. But yours is so well thought out and developed, that even though I don't like him, I love seeing him around ♥

[justforthegun]

Tohru Adachi | Persona 4 | justforthegun | gargleblasted
Ryotaro Dojima | Persona 4 | runandseek | hometrail/theskytides

[adachy]

homerail

[adachy]

GODDAMN IT

[justforthegun]

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PS ISN'T IT SO FUCKING FUNNY HOW NICE MY ADACHI LOOKS COMPARED TO YOUR FIERCE DEFAULT ICON kajfoaihsdfsdf

[adachy]

@ amatomnes and hometrail

Tohru Adachi | Persona 4 | adachy

There is a screened post on his journal if you'd feel more comfortable using that, too.

[justforthegun]

I TAKE THE CROWN THIS TIME, BITCH

[adachy]

LMFAO whatever kanda

[justforthegun]

SCREAM KANDA... GOD... WHY...

[ladynadiad]

@ luceti

Yuber (Suikoden III) blackenedchaos
Folken (Vision of Escaflowne) wishesofdestiny
Erim (Lufia II: Rise of the Sinistrals) oracleofdeath
Lillia (Arc the Lad: Twilight of the Spirits) friendofspirits
Ephraim (Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones) renaisprince
Shi-Long Lang (Ace Attorney Investigations) cravat_hater

General comments about my playing or comments about old characters I used to play which are listed here is cool too. All my current ones should have anon enabled HMD posts on the journals too.

[ladynadiad]

I love your Yuber so much. He's such a fun oh god fucking scary sometimes character to interact with.

[ladynadiad]

Awww, thank you anon! I'm glad to know people like him! Especially because sometimes I get scared that I've overdoing it.

[atoli]

★ i_s_l_a_n_d_rp
Maka Albarn → soulreads; (Soul Eater)
Youmu Konpaku → samyonrai; (Touhou Project)

★ damned
Yukari Takeba → remedying; (Persona 3)

★ somarium
Maka Albarn → resonancy; (Soul Eater)

★ campfuckudie
Remilia Scarlet → monthlyfate; (Touhou Project)

Hit me with anything! Thoughts, suggestions, actual crit... Whatever. I'm all for it.

[atoli]

Ahaha, I'm actually planning on it...

I'm definitely trying to get back into the groove! I think finally hopping into Plurk where everyone else is helped, since it's kind of like chat. At any rate, I'll totally be up to threading with you again.

[feartehreaper]

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