Concrit Post 16

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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[notrueking]

theskytides

- King Bradley/Wrath (notrueking): Fullmetal Alchemist
- Manfred von Karma (karmauberalles): Ace Attorney

pokedressing

- Giovanni (of_the_land): Pokemon Special

[flight_15]

/fangirls quietly

YOU AND YOUR OLD MEN

Your von Karma is...well, he's the only one I've ever seen, but I love him. I love how he's forceful and driven and a horrible horrible man and I love how he's still got a deathgrip on his pride even when he's not top dog anymore.

OPTIMUS PRIME LOVES YOU

[pana]

@ a_facility 「 Naruto 」 MADARA UCHIHA ➝ forefather
「 Persona 4 」 KANJI TATSUMI ➝ unmanliest
「 Avatar: The Last Airbender 」 SOKKA ➝ wisecracked
(soon?) @ sirenspull 「 Naruto 」 SHIKAMARU NARA ➝ underachieves

[he_is_wild]

ya hi how are you

[pana]

lmfao

[purpion]

Heya, Pana! It's Purple. Love your Madara! I would really like to see his more sinister side a little more and the interactions between him and his brother is awesome! You have his characterizations down to a science and that's awesome. He's marvelously manipulating and that's what really works for him.

[endlessmagic]

amatomnes
Beatrice l endlessmagic (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)
Tsunayoshi Sawada l skylinked (Katekyo Hitman REBORN!） l Daily Arc

hometrail
Beatrice l endlessmagic (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)

Tsuna is not yet intro'd, but he's been played around in Dear Mun and various places.

I am working on my activity and posting less into Amat

Any comments, positive or negative are always welcome :) Thank you.

[endlessmagic]

terrible, get off the road before you run over some poor old lady kt.

i wouldn't advise letting beatrice or tsuna drive either.

[endlessmagic]

.... LMAO AKITO IS THAT YOU????

LMAO GO AWAY TSUNA CAN DRIVE IF HE WANTS X-(!!!!

[antagonists]

HOW DID YOU KNOW

no he can't i bet he's as bad a driver as he is a mafia boss

Masamune

[thegamehiker]

luceti

moonlightoutlaw / F-Zero GP Legend
markofthewise / Avatar: The Last Airbender
greenlongjohns / Justice League Unlimited
eyebrowsonfire / Samurai Jack
myruneatemydad / Suikoden

And he's going into polychromatic soon, but he's been test run on D_M...

flamebro / Avatar: The Last Airbender

And my other muses can be found here.

[alternian]

Your Sokka is one of the best around! ♥

[markofthewise]

Thank you!

Re: Masamune

[standsonhands]

Hrrrrrrrrrrrngh Sokka.

That is all.

[slaygirl]

@ pokedressing
Cyrus | distorted_deity | Platinum gameverse
Lucian | novel_ties | Platinum gameverse/anime MacGyvering
Conway | proven_skills | Anime, post-summer academy
Lawrence III | chessgaming | Post-Movie 02

Have at, crit hard, go ahead and maim them.