Concrit Post 9

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[orangeglow_heal]

@ somarium

orangeglow_heal

@ gallifrey_rpg

dr_toshiko_sato (though no rping has happened yet)

Homeless

aiko_yoshino (OC)
light_and_rain (OC)
wolfgirlemily (Emily Young, Twilight Series)

[sagesoren]

Firstly, I'm really glad you took up Polka! There needs to be more ES RPers. \o/

I think maybe you should try to make her voice sound a teeny bit more informal, though. Use contractions like "I'm" more often, since she's more or less supposed to talk like a normal girl. Good luck! :>

[orangeglow_heal]

Thanks for the suggestion! I will try post her more informal. I am just a little more used to rp's that force you to post formal, so perhaps instead of posting as Polka should, my mind is thinking about that.

I also apologise if Polka seems out of character recently, just been posting before I go to bed, so sleepiness may make her sound OOC.