Concrit Post 9

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

[doublekill]

Oh I've been waiting for one of these.

Naoto Shirogane (P4) lasegugio
Chie Satonaka (P4) uwankangfoo
Lavi (DMG) the49th

just them yeah.

[doublekill]

you've never heard of it ?

[doublekill]

ok cause neither have i

[elwhyenen]

NAOTO OHHHHHHHHH
ohhh.
ohhohohoho.

i'll have you yet. you will be Mine
-squeezes-

[elwhyenen]

ok but yeah i meant to say i think you're playing everyone in a really interesting
Stimulating manner

i can't really comment on canon since i'm not familiar with any but..

i MIGHT just get into persona because of naoto-chan

[lasegugio]

ok i was gonna say that's not crit

yeah idk my style's really changed because i used to think all my threads were boring so i was like ok gotta step it up mary let's go

you should do persona it's great

[lasegugio]

mind the account......

[elwhyenen]

..-stares at corpse=

[doublekill]

there's no corpse in a musebox is there

[elwhyenen]

-SCREAMS SILENYTLY-

[doublekill]

why are you screaming

[elwhyenen]

that comment sounded just terrible with a slender int he woods icno i just looked at it with deadeyes and creaked my chair around to see behind

[doublekill]

LMFAOOOOOOO

maybe there is a corpse in the musebox.

[makiabre]

THEY'RE ALL PERFECT.