Concrit Post 9

Aug 24, 2009 14:15

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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maryohki August 24 2009, 18:36:38 UTC
@ amatomnes
~Hungary // Axis Powers Hetalia // my_fryingpan
~Miranda Lotto // D. Gray-man // timid_timewarp

@ somarium
~Rue // Princess Tutu // needs_no_heart

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maryohki August 24 2009, 20:16:12 UTC
I'm going to keep this anon, as I'm just a nervous person. I feel that your Hungary could maybe interact outside of her relationship with Austria some as she kind of just... posts for him. These things are meant to be good and here's me drivelling on, sorry :(

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maryohki August 24 2009, 20:46:01 UTC
Oh come now, anon, I don't bite, I promise! Compared to some of the outright abuse I've gotten for my characterizations in the past, this is a lovely piece of concrit; you're not drivelling on in the least!

That said, can I ask you to maybe be a bit more specific? I mean, I recognize that the majority of my logs are with Austria, yes, and that could use some work. I don't particularly like logging in general, just because I either feel like I'm not doing my partner justice with my posts, or I'm just being a perfectionist. So logs kinda wear me out, but that's definitely something I want to get better with.

Is that what you're referring to? Or do you mean overall? I know I don't put up a lot of network posts, either, which is another failing that I have, but I thought I was at least getting Hungary out and commenting decently...if not, thanks for the heads up, though! I'll work on the issue and try to fix it, though. And thanks again for actually getting up the nerve to comment, but not being rude about it. ♥

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maryohki August 24 2009, 20:56:22 UTC
it's more like... network postwise... If you click on Hungary's tag you'll see 90% of the posts are just aimed at Austria :| Maybe in another event like the rain one, Hungary could be with someone else. Embarassing but it's random cr a character wouldn't normally get :)

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maryohki August 24 2009, 21:08:22 UTC
Ah, fair enough. I do need to work on that, now that I look at it.

To be fair, I went with doing the rain event with Austria because his mun plays him as borderline obnoxiously reserved (which is IC, but still), so the rain was a good opportunity to actually get him to quit being pathetic about it. Not to mention she had dropped Austria for a while there and the rain event wasn't too much longer after she came back, so I was still kind of "AVJHVIOQHNOVQERHOHQEGVBU MY AUSTRIA HAS RETURNED!!!!!" like the spazcase that I am. ^^;;

But no, I totally agree with what you're saying now that I look at it. I looked at Hungary's tags recently and noticed that there was a lot less there in the first place than I thought, let alone interacting with other characters besides Austria. Again, thanks!

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