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Jan 09, 2009 19:34

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celestesai January 17 2009, 13:11:01 UTC

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Saigon/South Vietnam - mono_vn

This is the first comm I had ever RPed at. Please crit me as much as you can. |D;;; (And also I tried to use the best of Saigon's history reference I had.)

100yearsofwar January 17 2009, 18:06:36 UTC

I don't know much about South Vietnam except he's gentler than his counterpart.
AND YES YOUR SAIGON IS ADORABLE.
I just love how she's always so smiling and ready to spread her love ♥

A-and also it's pretty hard to get her IC nature, because she actually doesn't exist yet in Hetalia, but pff who cares 8|

celestesai January 17 2009, 18:19:26 UTC

Yeah, she is gentler, although she did stand up for her own rights! But she didn't gain it, her sister did. So yeah. ^^;

<3 Thank you! She's not always that innocent though. She would contemplate poisoning/killing/hypnotize the little Russian kid - if her sister doesn't stop her. :D [She would be too afraid to do it in front of HER or HIS MODERN SELF >>]

100yearsofwar January 17 2009, 18:22:19 UTC

H-hey don't poison my little boyfrien--I mean, little Ivan! ;; He's my only friendo!

celestesai January 17 2009, 18:25:16 UTC

Oh she did make him fainted! ♥ Butthemuncan'tthinkofanythingtodowithhimsoyeah.>>Myapology

brb_war January 26 2009, 16:19:31 UTC

.... Hawt.

red_underthebed January 18 2009, 19:24:34 UTC

The way you play South Vietnam is a good contrast from the gritty, guerilla North Vietnam, and I think you use that aspect of history well. It's also good that Sai is able to stand up for herself, even though she does seem like a peaceable girl most of the time. I wonder if Sai should be a bit more resentful towards Alfred(s) than she is, though...I know that Americans did many horrible things to both soldiers and civilians in the war, and this might be something that should be addressed in your characterization. In any case, you probably know more about this than I do, since you are Vietnamese and I am not. Besides, I don't know your time period: if she's pre-war then that's probably irrelevant. ^^;

mono_vn January 18 2009, 21:40:56 UTC

Thank you for your suggestions! ^^ Well that's kind of the thing I'm having troubles about; since I'm from the North, you know with the crazy guerilla plans xD;; I'm trying to ask my friends about how the South feels about America, but, almost everyone say that they love the US so much that they don't even want to be reunited. :|; 'tis explains why there is such a big difference from those two. Saigon is called "Saigon puppet" for that reason I think. ^^;

She is a peaceable girl; although she did stand up, but she didn't win. So she chose to be accepting. ^^

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