Concrit Post 3

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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lolfirst /brave

[pissedkitty]

protectyourtwin @ discedo

For the love of god please crit the crap out of me.

...and orz, my other characters are inactive / I'm not super paranoid about them. I know. I know.

Re: lolfirst /brave

[skybound_love]

All I know is that he's good to interact with and seems full of that good ol' CLAMP angst. Don't know much about him in canon.

[pissedkitty]

askdjgls thank you =3=

Surely there must be something I have to work on, though?

[synard]

Yes, let's see how this rolls!

luceti

Haseo | reversedarkness
Lute | heroicsymphony
Shinpachi Nagakura | 2ndunitcaptain
Al Elric | sing_thrush
Meryl Stryfe | bernardelli
Badou Nails | chain_smoked
Claus Valca | iptamenos

amatomnes

Clari Net | ryusei_taihou

8_dressing

Yuuichi Morino | volunteered
Dave Nails | lowerstrata
Vivi "Gadget" | pantieless

[gonsai]

Can I just say, probably for the hundredth time, how much your Lute has improved? It's amazing.

[synard]

I'll keep on keeping on with him. Thank you!

[chibi_scriber]

Oh Shini.

How I miss roleplaying with you. Though taking a look, I see you are at 8_dressing so I might pick up there so we can do a little RPing from time to time~

It's been ages since we've roleplayed together, so I can't really say too much for these specific characters, but playing Cornet with your Clari was one of the funnest things ever. I think you had him done quite well, which was why the relationship with Jet surprised me so much. Never would have seen that coming from Clari, but somehow it worked xD

lotsa <3

[obliviomancy]

polychromatic
obliviomancy | Kingdom Hearts | Roxas
onlyteasing | D.Gray-Man | Tyki Mikk

crucible_rpg
exstinctor | D.Gray-Man | Tyki Mikk

... and a varied assortment played at memes and dressing rooms listed here. Crit would be wonderful.

[obliviomancy]

I don't have anything constructive to add... I really like the way that you play all of them. Pigxas forever.

[obliviomancy]

Pigxas, oh. He's never going to live that down, is he. Anyway - thank you! ♥

i can type rly

[lewdness]

♕ amatomnes

✰ Euphemia li Britannia | pacifisting (Also in the Code Geass DR)
✰ Sora | savinworldsbrb

♕ Formerly in toujourshotel

✰ Riku Replica | betterdouble

Plus anyone I play in kingdomdressing or in my musebox, delewded.

I can take it. ♥

lies

[breepants]

I love your Euphie. I really do. I've seen other Euphie's who are either too sugary sweet, or are just plain dull. You have set the standard for Euphie, and I'm sure no one else can reach it. She's the perfect balance of sweetness, but keeps that iron will she gained in the show.

TL;DR stop being awesome.

fff

[pacifisting]

Thank youuuuu! ;A; S-so sweet omfg. I keep worrying that I'm making her too much of a brat sometimes, ahahaha.

Ilu bb.

[gailardia_cecil]

WHY IS THE GEASS CAST SO AWESOME?! Stop tempting me to watch it >|

I love your Euphie, she's sweet, kind, but you can see that she's not too sugary, and there's something authoritative about her and... I need to watch that show one day >.>;

Sora is so cute too! XD I love how he's such a dork and a sweetie, but he's not dumb or anything, just silly. It's adorable.

[misstakin]

@ discedo
Zelda/Sheik || sheikelda
Merle || xlord_van_fanx
Azula || bends_lightning
Kurogane || mages_game

Really been feeling wobbly lately, so anything and everything is appreciated.

[misstakin]

I'm not going to say anything about your activity, because I know it's not your fault entirely

[skybound_love]

You don't seem to post or reply a lot with Merle, which is sad, because what you do post of her is really good stuff. I'd like to see more of her around.

Azula is, as usual, well-played! I sometimes feel like I wish she'd stop her isolation, though. It feels like it's really limiting in terms of building plot with her, if she often refuses to entertain the idea of interacting with others.

[madeinoblivion]

I would really like to see Merle develop some surrogate Van-like attachment to one of our young heroes in Discedo. So she could do the whole...fangirly possessive thing that are really her key characterization points.

Also: New Zuko in Town. Plz to be fucking with his brain in sneaky, forwardly-polite, classy Azula fashion. Everyone likes an elegant, intelligent baddie before they zap your ass.

Zelda...I'm hoping we get to see her iron out some of the Vaati issues, and that her leadership will come through a little more.