Concrit Post 3

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[misstakin]

@ discedo
Zelda/Sheik || sheikelda
Merle || xlord_van_fanx
Azula || bends_lightning
Kurogane || mages_game

Really been feeling wobbly lately, so anything and everything is appreciated.

[misstakin]

I'm not going to say anything about your activity, because I know it's not your fault entirely

[skybound_love]

You don't seem to post or reply a lot with Merle, which is sad, because what you do post of her is really good stuff. I'd like to see more of her around.

Azula is, as usual, well-played! I sometimes feel like I wish she'd stop her isolation, though. It feels like it's really limiting in terms of building plot with her, if she often refuses to entertain the idea of interacting with others.

[madeinoblivion]

I would really like to see Merle develop some surrogate Van-like attachment to one of our young heroes in Discedo. So she could do the whole...fangirly possessive thing that are really her key characterization points.

Also: New Zuko in Town. Plz to be fucking with his brain in sneaky, forwardly-polite, classy Azula fashion. Everyone likes an elegant, intelligent baddie before they zap your ass.

Zelda...I'm hoping we get to see her iron out some of the Vaati issues, and that her leadership will come through a little more.

[usagi_no_hime]

I really desire to see more of your muses in Discedo and I am one of the many who think your Azula is pretty hardcore and amazing. I miss seeing you around and I actually thought you were one of the muns who dropped recently since Discedo really has been quiet lately.

I am relieved to see that's not the case!

As for Zelda/Sheik in general, I would love to see her more involved with the police force since to me she sorta *leads* them with other characters.
The only reason I say this is because she recruited Gabranth.

I like your characterization of Merle but you have to be very willing to play her in this game since the possibility of getting a Van there, is very slim. Her personality is very much on point but I am worried you might not be able to handle keeping Merle around because of the lack of canonmates.

[buddha_loves_me]

I know this may come off a tad bit nitpicky but Kurogane only addresses Tomoyo-hime and Souma by name. Everyone else has nicknames: Yuuko is the 'witch', Syaoran is the 'kid', Sakura is the 'princess', Fay is the 'mage', Mokona is the 'damn manjuu', etc. etc. I've noticed you've had him call people by name before (Sakura, Seishirou, and others) and it's the most striking thing that stands out to me.

Sometimes it can be hard to think of ways to describe people without actually saying their names. It can be difficult to think up names to call people, but it can also be fun!

[patchouli]

your kurogane and azula are phenomenal, really, and they always blow me away. i can't comment on merle and zelda but...well yeah, kuro and azula are fantastic. you play with azula's crazy side very very extremely well. also i think you've got kuro's grumpiness down and kind of...the grudging affection he has for his famiree i guess you could say?

i will echo the anon in saying that it often feels like you don't really bat an eye at any of the trc characters except fai though, and it's really hard to play with kurogane because of it. ;; i know i said exactly the same in the last hmd meme so i probably sound like a broken record, but...the anon has a point. there's a lot of famiree potential that none of us can tap into right now because kuro only seems to focus on fai, and i'd really like for that to stop. i know in part it has to do with your activity level and school and everything, but when you are around i'd like to see kuro branch out a little more.