Concrit Post 3
How's My Driving?
∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!
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∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!
► play nice! flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for rp_anon_memeroleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not ( Read more... )
I enjoy your characterizations, namely with Sheik and Kurogane. However, when it comes to Kurogane, it feels like you're only playing him for the plot with Fay. He may be quiet and not very friendly, but there are a lot of characters similar to that who have great character relations outside of their canon pairing/castmates. He rarely even seems to talk to Sakura or Syaoran, which is disappointing. There's so much potential for really cute threads with the Tsubasa cast as a whole that nobody ever gets to see. It turns me off to see he never really talks to anyone but Fay unless his entries get tagged by someone else.
I think you should spend a couple of days throwing him out at other, non-canon, non-CLAMP characters and try to build good CR with some other people. You have the voice the down, I'd like to see it be used properly!
As for Merle, I enjoy her, but she's definitely your least active character. She seems to only post when he name comes up on the Activity Check, and I never see her tagging other entries. I don't know what you want to do about that, but I just wanted to point it out, since I've taken notice to how much less active she is than your other characters.
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