Concrit Post 21

[hmd_me]

Sorry for the false start!

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[moonmadness]

@ kannagara_rpg

Light Yagami | Death Note | moonmadness

[mistyredhead]

gfdgfhgfsdjfgh <3333

Like. Your Light is ABSOLUTE LOVE so far. I think you write him brilliantly, all of his thought process and everything he says. And I admire you so much for the effort you put in in looking backwards at the network posts because that's something I should do, lol, but am too lazy (and a bit busy) for. 8D

So happy to have you in-game. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[moonmadness]

sdejfhsdfsdf omfg Toss

Ah, I'm glad you like him so much! :D He's tricky to get right, but so much fun when it works. And yeahh, the looking back at stuff. At some point I will be on top of that and able to spend more time, you know, actually writing tags WHICH IS THE POINT.

Thank you, I'll try to keep it up. <3 I wish I'd apped sooner!

[mistyredhead]

<333

...ogod that icon, wat.

You're welcome! 8D Looking forward to that~

Better late than never~

[binarybullets]

Adstringendum

「　ｎ　ａ　ｒ　ｕ　ｔ　ｏ　」 UCHIHA IZUNA➝ visionofblood

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Dirty Vegas

「　ｎ　ａ　ｒ　ｕ　ｔ　ｏ　」 UCHIHA ITACHI➝ pinwheeleyes

[binarybullets]

I have a little difficulty reading your Itachi as there is this air of languid, Wildean prose about him that, while often beautifully written, is just not reminiscent of Itachi in canon.

I know that interpretations can vary, but Itachi as a seductive creature with a belief/awareness of his attractiveness is something that I can't see any suggestion of in canon to warrant that spin on him. I do wonder if your own view of him as an attractive man is colouring your play and if perhaps a canon review would help?

All that said, your prose is lovely - I would just like to see it used more ICly, I suppose?

[pinwheeleyes]

Sorry for the delay in my response! I'm at work *slaves* XD

Regarding my writing style not being a good match for the muse - I'll do my best to work on that.

I'm confused where in my threads/logs I had him self-aware of his looks and acting seductive, can you give me an example where I did that? I've been trying for the exact opposite, like in his log with Sasuke where Sasuke asks him when the last time was he showered or brushed his hair. I try to play him in a way where his personal looks and welfare come as a postscript to everything else. I can't apologize enough if I completely hit the mark on that and had him acting seductively.

I'll definitely hit the manga again this weekend.

[binarybullets]

It just tends to drip through in his sexual interactions in a sort of undercurrent of languid sexiness as a constant. Not to say that you write him as a sexual predator (the opposite in fact as you seem to portray him as the woobie, which again I do not think rings true to the character. Even bottoming hard, Itachi would be in control or fighting for it, because that is his canonical nature). But that aside, there is a constant sense of "look at this man and how gorgeously damaged he is" that distracts from the character as presented in canon

[protagonist]

AMATOMNES:

Souji Seta | Persona 4 | thefool
Battler Ushiromiya | Umineko no Naku Koro ni | antifantasy
Vanitas | Kingdom Hearts: Birth by Sleep | forgeblade

MAYFIELD:

Battler Ushiromiya | Umineko no Naku Koro ni | goldensorcerer

OTHER (d_m, romancedressing, hopefully splendorocity:

Red | Pokemon (gameverse) | catchings

i know i've been practically non-existant with battler recently -- a lot of it has to do with inspiration being sapped, but i'm trying to gain it back ASAP because i seriously adore playing him. ;;;

[memoryofmyself]

HI YOU DO NOT KNOW ME BUT

would you happen to have a youtube account called BattlerUroshima?

[protagonist]

I DO NOT ACTUALLY, they must love battler like i do....

...and belatedly

[forgeblade]

LIES AND SLANDER BTW, i do too know you if you happen to be that iseveryone!

in before i just misremembered and you're not them LMAO

[andvainglorious]

Gargleblasted/El Dorado

The Master (Simm) | andvainglorious | Doctor Who | Concrit
Apped at Damned.

Homeless

Shaz Granger | notatory/smartplonk | Ashes to Ashes | Concrit
Koschei | hypnotizing | Doctor Who
Frances 'Lol' Jenkins | likelollipop | This is England 1986
Xerxes Break | allmoveone | Pandora Hearts | Concrit

And any others you might know of.

[unhypnotizing]

It's pretty much no secret that ilu. I mean, you enabled me to make this guy, and I'm so glad you're my Koschei because you're so ridiculously easy to talk to ALL OF THE TIME. Like we're talking right now about the derpiest things BUT IT MAKES ME HAPPY OKAY.

I mean, playing in a game with you as the Doctor now, I'm already really enjoying bouncing off of you. It's really fun - I'm settling into GB and hopefully soon my confidence won't be all /PUKES UP OVER ITSELF so I can be more fun to talk to LOL

I still can't believe how long we've known each other and never really. Idk, acted on that? I mean, we're so alike, it's hard to understand why we haven't spoken sooner. ODD, but it's awesome that we speak now. You're such an awesome person and tagging with you is so fun! So I'm glad we're sort of rp partners now.

/LATCHES ONTO YOUR SIDE AND NEVER LETS GO

[hypnotizing]

I GAVE YOU A SENTENCE or two. AND YOU ESSAYED AT ME. You make me feel so inferior 8( That's not the word I was looking for, but ICR it right now.

omg I'm so chuffed I managed to enable you to make that guy. SO CHUFFED. Because it's so fun threading with you AND SO RELAXED that. I don't know, man, IT'S JUST SUPER FUN AND EASY. BECAUSE YOU'RE EASY. And it took me like five attempts to type 'because' correctly then.

Also, I AM SO HAPPY YOU ENABLED ME TO APP AT GB WITH YOUR MASTER. Because even though we were like 'YEAH WE SHOULD PLAY THEM TOGETHER' for ages at each other, I was never really sure how well we'd click playing them together? EVEN THOUGH YOUR DOCTOR IS AND ALWAYS HAS BEEN AWESOME we both know how awkward it can be. But then we had that stupid little D_M thread and it was marvellous. And then the thread on your intro was also marvellous AND IT'S JUST A REALLY MARVELLOUS THING.

I knooow. It's bad. We should've started talking sooner 8|

fkjg /LATCHED TO

[unhypnotizing]

YOU KNOW HOW TL;DR I AM. YOU HAVE DISCOVERED THIS. I CAN'T HELP IT, it just happens and I don't evenME TOO, it's like. idk. it's just so simple and easy, and I might think a little for Theta but it's also. Well, I suck at OCs, and Theta nearly NEARLY is one - I mean, we don't have much on him, really, other than the fact that he's not entirely good at the whole STUDIES THING and the academy and stuff. But idk, he's kind of easy for me, because I've almost worked him out now? Even though there's no canon review or whatever - it's weird but awesome. And you are my Koschei - whether he's the Master or just Koschei - forever and ever. We even share the whole 'omg Doctor who fans know much more than I do' thing

[alwaysuserubber]

campfuckudie!!

Monkey D. Luffy, One Piece (alwaysuserubber)
Haninozuka "Honey" Mitsukuni, Ouran High School Host Club (hisshortcake)
Mojo Jojo, The Powerpuff Girls (monologogo)
Flapjack, The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack (wesssssssssssst)

Threadlogs, screened crit posts, and all kinds of rad stuff is here. o7

[gotmorbucks]

I decided to look up your Mojo journal because FUCK YES, and LJ made it much easier to find posts like that recently, so!

I definitely like what I'm seeing. He's hilariously redundant and has that sort of immaturity that I'd believe would be overlooked by other people attempting Mojo. His arrogance is apparent in the post I saw too, so that's super good.

Also, I can't state enough how much I'm glad to see other PPG RPers. Keep up the good work!

[alwaysuserubber]

Hahaha, wow! It's been awhile since I did anything big with him, so I definitely wasn't expecting any kind of feedback about Mojo. Thanks a ton! I WILL TRY TO CONTINUE DOING HIM JUSTICE

[hana_king]

You play a rrrrrreally good Luffy, and when I'm not too lazy to stalk, I love reading his threads. Especially with Zoro.

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+ A MILLION for playing Flapjack.