Concrit Post 18

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[notakissslut]

amatomnes
Dawn Summers | BtVS | notakissslut

eldorado_rpg
Dawn Summers | BtVS | orumad

thelongnow_rpg
Dawn Summers | BtVS | orumad

twilightzonerpg
Dawn Summers | BtVS | orumad

sixwordstories/various verses therein
Shyanne Arceaneaux (OC) | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | wrestlesgators
Tessa Harker | Original Character | coulduseafriend
Meg Masters (AU) | Supernatural | 50wordsoflatin
Wanda Maximoff (AU) | Marvel/Marvel Cinematic Universe | icandothemath
Bethany Morrow (OC) | Supernatural | noturbabysitter
Christina Nickson | Point Pleasant | noiwon
Gwen Raiden | Angel the Series | tombraiden
Raziel | Biblical, Supernatural (OC) | benot_afraid
Dawn (Summers) Reilly (AU) | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | stillnotakey
Ruby | Supernatural | iloveatallman
Mary Shannon | In Plain Sight | cantstandpeople
Ryan Sharp (OC) | Doctor Who/Torchwood, Dollhouse | afewloosewires
Dawn Summers | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | orumad
Emma Summers (OC) | Marvel | takestothesky
Marla Tudor | Original, Supernatural (OC) | notsabrina
Clyde West (OC) | Blade | beabadexample
Dean Winchester | Supernatural | lookingforabeer
Samantha Winchester (AU) | Supernatural | alrightjerk

Looking particularly for crit in regards to Ruby and Dean. Thanks!