Concrit Post 18

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[todd_fan]

All @ paradisa and occasionally on dear_mun

Anthony Crowley | Good Omens | onlyanapple
Lorne | Angel | mysticalvender
Wybie Lovat | Coraline | why_born
Shortpack | Marvel Comics | pocketsizedpal
Sister | Red vs Blue | girly_laps
John Marston | Red Dead Redemption | mademyownpath

Holy crap first? o__O

[wiederholt]

You know how much I love your Crowley and Wybie.

Crowley is perfect and reading his threads are like... reading more of Good Omens.

Wybie is just amazing, because you were able to expand him from.... well, what he is in the movie, to a real fleshed-out character. I don't even know how you manage to play somebody like him for so long with no canonmates.

[why_born]

Aww thank you <3

And I do it through grit. GIT AND HOPE.

The fact that a Crowley got a first post feels symbolic somehow

[the_bentley]

Your Crowley is amazing to thread with, and play off as well. I've only seen him around dear_mun, and not stalked you in-game, but you've got his voice down pat.

[endlessmagic]

@ amatomnes
antimystery - Beatrice. Umineko no Naku Koro ni ( Chiru )
stoppunchinghim - Serah Farron. Final Fantasy XIII.

Both have anon enabled, screened, non ip-logged posts in their journal. Thank you so much for your feedback

And I know I've been slow;; I'm definitely not dropping any threads!

[endlessmagic]

still the best beato to ever exist.

+1

[endlessmagic]

Re: +1

[endlessmagic]

fjkl;asfasf /////

[adachy]

@amatomnes:
Tohru Adachi | Persona 4 | adachy

@gargleblasted:
Ryotaro Dojima | Persona 4 | justforadrink
Known issues: Activity! July's been busy, I'll work on getting him out there more.

[endlessmagic]

I really admire how much thought you put into Adachi. I don't think I need to say how well you play him without sounding repetitive at this point♥

[adachy]

thanks so much, bb ;w; ♥

[heartimperial]

your adachi is fucking excellent! i'm having a hard time describing it but his characterization is really rich. i~~ hope to be good like you one day.

[justforthegun]

Tohru Adachi | Persona 4 | justforthegun | gargleblasted

[misheard]

You're amazing. I don't feel well-equipped enough to comment on characterization, but your threads, descriptions, character interactions, are incredibly engrossing. I don't share a game with you, but I always enjoy seeing you on memes and dear_mun, and the one time I was linked to an IC thread of yours it blew me away.

[justforthegun]

Sorry to be nosy, but which IC thread are you talking about? I'd like to know specifically since I'm a little inconsistent at times. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this! It makes me really happy to hear people enjoy reading what I write.

[misheard]

Augh, I don't have the link on me... I know it was with Izanami? And they... really weren't getting along. That probably describes ten threads, I'm sorry. I'm mostly left with how striking your [description/narrative/whatever you call this, I'm sorry my brain doesn't work right now] was rather than actual events.

[zombiebat]

I've been super inactive, but.

edensphere:
DOGS || Haine Rammsteiner || fewterer
Gundam 00 || Ribbons Almark || therealplan

[sapphire_hime]

Dude when did you drop Halle?

[salvifical]

I HAVEN'T BUT I PROBABLY WILL 8(

[sapphire_hime]

BAW 8(

We should do an AU where Halle's lives in Soma's head. Instead of Alle's.