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[zarahjoyce]

THE USUAL PEOPLE:

@ taxonomites

glowingseer ⌘ Cordelia Chase
revivedqueen ⌘ Illyria
freezecharm ⌘ Piper Halliwell

@ elegycity
suchprettyscars ⌘ Darla

@ dear_mun, sixwordstories

totallyharmless ⌘ Harmony Kendall
songsoflorne ⌘ Lorne
oldgangofmine ⌘ Charles Gunn
knowyourlosers ⌘ Cordelia Chase (BtVS)

spock/gwen mun btw

[phonologic]

We're in two games together and yet we've barely played together D: I need to give Cordy an opportunity to troll Spock.

I'm rusty on my Angel knowledge, but I really think you're spot-on with Illyria and Cordelia. I can hear Cordelia's voice every time she lols/trolls at people in Taxon, and I really love Illyria's reaction to Wesley. I am kind of stalking those two now to see how all of that works out.

But yeah. This is the least constructive ever.

asfdhygj hello

[glowingseer]

THIS MUST BE REMEDIED AS IT IS AN OUTRAGE. Also, yes, I need to have Cordy troll the Star Trek people more :3 And I... really have a feeling their conversation will be epic in so many ways.

Thank you so much! tbh I was all sorts of nervous about that thread. It's always hard to predict/depict how something like Illyria would react to situations like that XD

♥!

[phonologic]

YES PLZ. I'll be posting some stuff with him soon so no worries. He may have to use her for his experiments....collecting the vitals of people in Taxon. [ cue Angel attempting to kick Spock's ass. WHO WOULD WIN THAT FIGHT? CLEARLY WE NEED TO ASK RUMI. ]

You're welcome! Playing non-human characters can be rough with stuff like that. I think your response with her is very IC.

♥~

[glowingseer]

Oh lol. Because she hasn't been subjected to an experiment in the last, oh, two days or so, so this must be fixed, stat! XD

Plus, they need to talk about Bones. Seriously.

[phonologic]

Something is rotten in the state of Taxon.

Looool oh man that conversation. If you want to see Spock on the brink of looking pissed, mention Bones. The rest of the conversation will fall into place.

[glowingseer]

OH MAN then Cordy at the very start of their conversation will be like, "Say you're wearing a uniform like Bones!"

...yes.

[phonologic]

I think the same works on Bones too if you'd ever like a rant from him.

[glowingseer]

Don't worry, Cordy's always been at the receiving end of Bones' rants like 99.99% of the time. Probably because she usually provokes him.

you rang?

[sunkist]

...would the nerve pinch even work on the undead?

indeed i did

[sonofsarek]

Probably not...unless his nervous system is functioning. They're probably even in a fist fight. Clearly Spock needs to research this. FOR SCIENCE.

[whomever]

I've interacted with quite a number of your characters either at dear_mun or sixwordstories ( with some of these guys, for reference) and ngl I'm pretty pumped to find your comment here so that I can say how much I love playing with you! You like hyper intimidate me in a good way; I don't think I've read any of your threads that don't sound spot on or that I didn't want to know more about the characters just because you make them so interesting to tag with. One tiny thing I might have, but I'm not even totally sure about, just from what I've read which admittedly isn't much, I haven't seen your Illyria use any contractions, which do pepper her speech a considerable amount of the time - but! like I said, it could very well just be the threads I'm reading, and no matter what I never fail to hear her voice. ♥

I hope I run into you more because you're really a quality ATS player, and that's usually a fairly oxymoronic statement.

ASASFJNKHCOLK THIS COMMENT

[glowingseer]

...yeah let me just, um. collect my thoughts ♥

THANK YOU! I love playing with you, too! The thread we did with your Illyria and my Cordy was just... I loved it to pieces, ngl - and I've always wanted to do a face-off with them without player-cesting (because the one person I know of who plays Illyria doesn't anymore, sob). And about contractions... heh. Admittedly I started playing Illyria years after I've watched Season Five again - it was only after a thorough canon review that I realized she does use contractions, but I just... have it in my head that she doesn't, so... I'm not making sense. But yes, I should, I know XD

/too lazy to log out~

[aspirinoracle]

Firstly on Illyria before this all devolves into a mess of flail: Oh man I totally did that too. Okay minus the "years after" part but I started off not using contractions and thankfully caught myself pretty early, but man it pissed me off at first, having to think about when she'd use a contraction and when she wouldn't. And at this point I am kind of just talking about it because it's like oh my god you play Illyria you totally get this.

Secondly, on everything else and aforementioned mess of flail: alksdjalksjd phew. I just adore your playing and I get silly and paranoid around people I like but don't talk to but kind of wish I did. And OH GOD a face-off between Illyria and Cordy could only end one of three ways: Wes steps in (despite Spike's insistence to just let them go at it except with the addition of a mudpit), Illyria nerve pinches Cordy unconscious as a compromise for not snapping her tactless neck, or they have a day of shopping and a sleepover in which Illyria's hair gets braided and Cordelia tries on blue lipstick and

[revivedqueen]

I TOTALLY DO, MM-HMM.

...see, this is why I don't ever let them interact in Taxon. Cordy's just too blunt for her own good and of course words will be unleashed since, hey, Illyria's wearing her dead friend's body. And Illyria will just. Yes, snap her tactless neck without further ado. but this doesn't stop me from wishing I don't play these two characters in the same freakin' game :|

ALSO, HELLO, this will be my first time to actually talk to a mun who plays Cordy as well /unimportant fact

[whomever]

Which I'm sure you can handwave perfectly as being Angel's fault on account of just wanting Cordelia to keep, you know, living. But hey, if Taxon ever has a fourth wall event, you can have my Cordy and/or Illyria to butt heads and/or snap necks with. :3

Mine too technically! And I'm Pink, btw. Feel like I should formally introduce myself if I haven't yet. I like long walks on the beach and ceruleous women.