Of Those Chosen: The Dreamless - Chapter Four

[hjcallipygian]

Story: Of Those Chosen: The Dreamless
Chapter: 04 - Easy Business
Rating: 17+ [R-equivalent] (language, violence, sexual situations)
Pairings/Characters: Ensemble, plus OCs
Word Count: ~2000 (for this chapter)
Author's Notes: I actually posted a new chapter within a month of the last one! Go ME! Anyway. As always, shout out to my girls sadiekate and prncesssprklpnt, who

Comments

[jgracio]

The buildup is gonna be great when we can read it all, but it's killing me when reading it in WIP form. :)

I second Faith's last thought.

[hjcallipygian]

I'm definitely making it a priority to get these chapters out in a more timely manner, now. I've already started on the next chapter, and I want to finish it this weekend. It's the type of story that will read much better if you still have what previously happened fresh in your mind, so I think it's really something I owe to readers.

I'm glad you like what's going on with it so far. I talked with prncesssprklpnt about what's going on, and most of her guesses as to what is building up were interesting, but not quite right. So it'll be interesting to see reader reaction to the plot twists later on.

Thanks for the feedback! =)

[brown_betty]

I am also much with the wtf! I can see how many threads you've started, though this is going to be huge.

[hjcallipygian]

Heh. I have the whole thing plotted out on a bunch of 3x5 notecards. And I have little charts and spreadsheets to keep all the minor O.C.'s organized, so I don't mess up someone's last name or something lame like that. Wow. I'm lame, aren't I? =)

Did you ever see the flash animation of "the end of the world"? There was a kangaroo that kept saying "WTF, mate?" in an Australian accent, and anytime someone types out WTF, that's what I think of.

I'm really glad you're reading this story. Thanks for commenting!

[4thdixiechick]

What the fuck was going on?

You will let us know, won't you?

Great update

[hjcallipygian]

Oh, absolutely! I will definitely let you guys know what is going on by the end of the story.

I'm glad you like it so far. =) Tomorrow night I'm going to write as much as I can. Hopefully, I'll get the next chapter done then.

[4thdixiechick]

Hopefully, I'll get the next chapter done then.

Cool beans!

[nocturnalista]

I missed the first three chapters, but Yay! I caught up today. Excellent stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes. And the pickle-dream reference cracked me up. I love that movie.

Looks like Xander's karma has caught up with him.

[hjcallipygian]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying this story so far. I'm really getting back into the writing of this story. I think it's going to start coming a lot faster, so you're getting into it right at the right time.

[iyalode]

Xander Harris - the Michael Corleoni of slaying, just when he thinks he's out...

So good to see more of this.

[hjcallipygian]

"Leave the stake, take the twinkie."

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it. The next chapter is mostly about the Slayers out in Cleveland -- I hope humans find it interesting to see how the Council has been set up...

[hjcallipygian]

Oh, and would you be upset if I gak this line from you? I think it would fit perfectly in the story at a later point. "Just when I think I'm out, they bring me right back. I'm the Michael Corleoni of Slaying."

[iyalode]

Sure, want, take have.

This is still one of my favourite stories. You've created such an interesting OC with that vampire I want more of him.