Here is my revised (and a lot longer) Chapter Ten. I give props and shout-out to my homie
ludditerobot, who helped me out a lot with this chapter and keeping it on-track and properly focused and all that. He rocks.
The first person to recognize where I got the title for this chapter from win an all-expense-paid* trip to the moon.
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But that's close enough. You win the moon trip -- congratulations.
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Faith stood a few feet from the foot of the stairs, keeping(?) a close eye on Chao-Ahn and Helen...
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:-P
You got me intrigued...
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I came into Living History somewhere around part #48, and Lilac City around part 180, so I know how you feel catching up. I hope you like the beginning as much as you liked this chapter (I always feel like beginnings are my weakest parts).
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I have added you to my friends list so I can keep up with this.
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