...and we will become strangers - PiErika, PiYui; PG-13, AU

[hizashikage]

title: …and we will become strangers
author: ginzarhapsody
pairing: YamaPi/Toda Erika, YamaPi/Aragaki Yui
rating: PG-13
word count: 9469 words
summary: AU. YamaPi is a dancer. While living the dream, we sometimes hurt and get hurt along the way.
author's notes: written for tinyangl, originally based on the AU premise of Aragaki Yui and Toda Erika as rival rockstars. I

Comments

[tinyangl]

SOBBING SOBBING SOBBING. You know how I said before that this would definitely be worth the wait? I FUCKING KNEW IT.

Okay, I'm going to get off my phone and onto my laptop for a PROPER comment. Just know I am seriously all *_________* ILU PEYTON.

[tinyangl]

Okay, I took a while to get up the preparedness (not a word, but ignoring that) to write this, because I don't think I have the words to express how much I adored this. Because I did. There was no question that I would love this; it hit everything that I love and adore and then some.

Let's start with the nonlinear, because you know and the world knows that I am a huge fan and I love piecing together stories when I'm given present and past simultaneously. It's such a pleasure seeing how things work out and what causes them to turn out that way. I enjoyed seeing how Yamapi worked with Erika in the past and how he works with Yui in the present, and how different those two personalities interacted with him. Loved seeing slight comparisons in scenarios like when they address each other informally, or the club scenes.

Then there's the FRIENDSHIPS. RYOPIN. OT3 FOREVER, OKAY? I love that they're still awesome friends in this, and how they initially like, uh, congrats, but really? Laughing hardcore. And then the scene in MSSL rehearsals

[ginzarhapsody]

♥ this comment could never be tl;dr. even if you did a line-by-line flail of the fic, i would read every word. ♥ honestly, i had every reason to give up on this fic so many times over the years simply because i kept on saying i would get to it, but i didn't. i even have an entire folder (full of pictures of inspiration + this fic) called "kami fic". i just couldn't give up, not for you. inadvertently (or not), this fic has the last four years of my life history written into it too. so it's like i wrote it in blood for you! :D lol

and as i said before, payback for je_whiteday 2010. cackle. ;)

[dalampasigan]

OMGGGG a wild TiNa appears. First fic I've read for 2014 and it is perfect. <3 Made me realize how much I miss Akanishi troop together. Woot will reread. I wish this was an actual J-drama, haha.

[sinonymity]

We should do it again sometime. ;)

That said, you know all the parts I love and all the parts you got me to love by my nudging you to write more more MORE so. ♥ Good job, m'dear!