Behind the Scenes of a Summer Drama - PiYui; PG-13

[hizashikage]

title: Behind the Scenes of a Summer Drama
author: nihongofrancais
pairing: Yamashita Tomohisa/Aragaki Yui
rating: PG-13
word count: 2,408 words
summary: They've only done two dramas together, both in the summer season.
author's notes: written for trivialaffair for je_whiteday 2009. My love to anamuan for beta-reading and tinyangl helping me conspire to finish. *grin*

Comments

[lastingdreams8]

OMW!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!
I'm not much of a Yui/Pi shipper, but this was SO GREAT!!
I loved that you pulled people from both their pasts and works and just tied them towards the present:)
You are great with chronology and just finding the commonality between the two:D

And then I ADORE the bike scene:) It's kind of like Koizora, but WAY BETTER! It's totally cute mentioned Yamapi's mama bike, and yes, Yui saying that it's better and grabbing his waist *sigh* amazing!
And then I love the ending!
Simple, yet lovely ♥

[lastingdreams8]

haha-oops "It's totally cute that you* mentioned Yamapi's mama bike"
And I should also say that your characterization is spot on:)
I could really picture Yui speaking softly and smiling brightly:)

[catskilt]

*____________*
Everything about this fic was lovely. The pacing (I particularly liked the parts where Tegoshi and Shige mentioned Yui to Pi), the atmosphere (so sweet and innocent somehow!), the characters (I love Pi being so playful and light-hearted, and Yui is a sweetheart), the writing....this just reminds me that there are some things sacred to het fics that just can't be translated into slash ♥

My favourite lines were:

YamaPi knows good and well-enough when he's being let down gracefully.

She grins. "I think I can fit you into my schedule."

He can see yesterday, today, and tomorrow in her eyes. He can see forever.

So much love ♥ Thank you for sharing and I have to inform trivialaffair how jealous I am that she got a fic like that XD

[gauri92]

oh my god..this was absolutely amazing!!! i love these two together!!! and your story is wonderful, very well written and relistic as well...

i hope u write more....iv read ur drabbles as well....but i just came to know tht u had written them....i somehow never know where to search for new stories about these two (wenever written...)

[jtriskell]